Question

19．假如你是李華，你家樓下住著一位新搬來的英國人James，他在你家信箱里留了一封信，抱怨你們家維修廚房時候產生的噪音，請給她寫一封回信，內容主要包括：
    1．表達歉意
    2．解釋原因
•父母白天上班，只能晚上維修，
•不專業(yè)，耗時長…
    3．說明措施，請工人周末白天維修注意：
  1．詞數100左右； 2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；  3．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數． 
Dear James，
    We were very shocked to get your letter complaining about the noise from our flat．
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sorry to have caused these problems．
                                                          Yours faithfully，
                                                                                   Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是寫一封信，關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，本文的主題是回復關于樓下鄰居抱怨你們家維修廚房時候產生的噪音的事，考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系．靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當．語言力求準確、簡潔．同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．
【亮點說明】學生寫作要有靈活性，同時要表現出較好的英語語言表達能力．文章使用了很好的短語和句子：accept our apologies接受道歉，are busy at忙于…，have to不得不，What's more還有，have difficulty in做..有困難，As a consequence結果，a lot of大量，call in請來，叫來．we didn't expect it spoiled your evenings and caused you some distress．是并列句，they are not so expert at doing house repairs that they have difficulty in getting things to fit properly．是結果狀語從句，We promise that he'll work only during daytime hours，so you won't be disturbed in the evenings again．是結果狀語從句  As a consequence，it is taking longer than expected and has resulted in a lot of banging and hammering．句子出彩，為文章加分．

解答 Dear James，
      We were very shocked to get your letter complaining about the noise from our flat．we didn't expect it spoiled your evenings and caused you some distress．We do hope you accept our apologies．（表達歉意）
       As my parents are busy at work during daytime，they have to refit our kitchen in the evenings．（高分句型一）What's more，they are not so expert at doing house repairs that they have difficulty in getting things to fit properly．（高分句型二）As a consequence，it is taking longer than expected and has resulted in a lot of banging and hammering．（解釋原因）
       As the repair is still not finished，we will call in a professional worker to finish the work this weekend．（高分句型三）We promise that he'll work only during daytime hours，so you won't be disturbed in the evenings again．（說明措施）
        Sorry to have caused these problems．
                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．