假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線 (\)劃掉。修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

  注意:

  1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只充許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

When I was in high school , I had an awful experience . At that time I was so

brave and outgoing as the others. Because of that, a boy name Big Tom would do all

kinds of bad things to me . I was scaring to see him.

So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited me to

dine out . I agreed. We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went well.

By the end of that night, Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me . Now we

have become close friends.

In our life, everyone may make mistakes. What counts most are that we have the

courage to correct them.

 

【答案】

 Was∨→not

 as the→去掉the

 name→named

 scaring→scared

 So→But

 invited→invite

 nothing→everything

 By→At

 has→had

 are→is

【解析】

試題分析:本文敘述了作者在上學時,曾經(jīng)被一個叫Big Tom的欺負,后來兩人相約在酒吧,Big Tom向作者道了歉,兩人重歸于好,最后作者指出,我們每個人都會犯錯誤,最重要的是要勇氣來改正錯誤。

 根據(jù)下文作者很害怕Big Tom,可知作者當時不夠勇敢,故改為否定句。

 the others表示特指,除了自己之外的所有人,很顯然不符合這里的語意; others表示泛指其他的人。

 整個句子已有動詞would do,所以name只能用非謂語動詞,a boy與name之間是被動關系,故用named.

 scaring令人驚恐的;scared人感到驚恐的。這里指人感到害怕。

 So表示前因后是果,But表示前后是轉折關系。

 invite和to see并列,要形式一致,故用原形。

 nothing沒有事;everything一切事情;這里指一切都很順利。

 At the end of that night指的是他們在酒吧的那天晚上,快到結束時Big Tom向作者道了歉。

 apologized用的是過去式,Big Tom做錯事當然是在道歉以前故用過去完成時had done.

 What counts most這是主語從句作主語 謂語動詞用單數(shù)is.

考點:這是一篇記敘文。

點評:主要考查考生的對于基礎知識的掌握程度,考查單詞,短語及句型等,考生要想得高分必須靠平時的積累。在做題時要會活學活用。

 

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