Question

【題目】假如你是李華。你的朋友Tommy是一個手機低頭族，無論站著、坐著、走著，他都在低頭玩手機。請就此給Tommy寫一封信，說服他改掉這個壞習(xí)慣。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭語和結(jié)尾語已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：過度使用overuse

Dear Tommy,

There are many people now playing with their cell phones no matter where they are. And I know you are not an exception.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】There are many people now playing with their cell phones no matter where they are. And I know you are not an exception. I’m writing to persuade you to get out of this habit.

There is no doubt that cell phones play an important part in our daily life. However, being addicted to cell phones does a lot of harm to the users. First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases. Second, if you always overuse your cell phone, your head as well as your neck will ache, which will have a bad effect on your daily life. Besides, on your way home or to school , with your attention fully focused on the cell phone, perhaps , you will fail to notice the traffic around you, which will be a great danger to you.

Therefore, I sincerely wish you to give up your bad habit and use your cell phone wisely .

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本題考查提綱類作文。首先審題，假如你是李華。你的朋友Tommy是一個手機低頭族，無論站著、坐著、走著，他都在低頭玩手機。請就此給Tommy寫一封信，說服他改掉這個壞習(xí)慣。其次要確定時態(tài)，表示一個客觀事實，用一般現(xiàn)在時。在寫作過程中，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合題目所給出的信息，不要出現(xiàn)偏題問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有文采。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些高級句型。例如Second, if you always overuse your cell phone, your head as well as your neck will ache, which will have a bad effect on your daily life.這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。Besides, on your way home or to school , with your attention fully focused on the cell phone, perhaps , you will fail to notice the traffic around you, which will be a great danger to you. 這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。