Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。短文中有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（Λ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Cathy,

I’m writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just heard that you are disappointing because you can’t afford famous brands.

I shall say that it is naturally for people to care about his appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes will make one more eye-catching. Therefore, I think it is really a waste of money to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add the burden of your parents.

What’s more, beauty is just skin deep. There are many things in which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of knowledge and a warm heart will surely win other’s respect.

As the saying goes, never judge the person by appearance. I do hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to be.

Yours,

Jane

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 had (have)

 disappointing (disappointed)

 naturally (natural)

 his (their)

 thing (things)

  Therefore (However)

 add(加to)

 in (去掉in)

  beside (besides)

 the (the 改為a)

【解析】

試題分析：

 從后面的you are disappointing 可知用現(xiàn)在完成時：had (have)

 考查形容詞：修飾人，一般用過去分詞的形容詞：disappointing (disappointed)

 考查形容詞：做表語用形容詞：naturally (natural)

 考查動詞：用their代替people：his (their)

 從后面舉的例子：like clothes and shoes 可知用復(fù)數(shù)thing (things)

 后面說：買名牌是浪費錢，表示轉(zhuǎn)折用however，Therefore (However)

 考查詞組：add to增加：add(加to)

 考查定語從句：先行詞是things，在定語從句中做主語，不缺介詞in (去掉in)

  beside 是在…旁邊，這里是除了：(besides)

 考查冠詞：第一次提到一句俗語，用a， (the 改為a)

考點：考查短文糾錯

點評：考查考生在上下文中靈活運用語法的能力，對于時態(tài)和單復(fù)數(shù)的考查是重點，同時要注意一些固定的結(jié)構(gòu)。