Question

閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
My husband received a letter a month ago a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life.
In the letter she wrote,“You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I would be interested in it. To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California. You played an important part.  Thank you!”
What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health.
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]
1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2. 以約120個(gè)詞就老師影響學(xué)生的話題談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ瑑?nèi)容包括：
（1）上文使你想起哪位對(duì)你幫助最大的老師；
（2）舉例說(shuō)明該老師對(duì)你學(xué)習(xí)或成長(zhǎng)的影響；
（3）你怎樣看待老師對(duì)學(xué)生的影響。
[寫(xiě)作要求]
1. 作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫。

Answer 1

概括參考：
The writer’s husband received a Thank You letter from his students when he is in poor, which tells the teachers effort on the students. The letter has a special meaning to the teacher.

此文是一篇記敘文，延續(xù)了2011年的體裁形式。結(jié)合學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)生活以及助人的社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)，很好地體現(xiàn)了情感教育，讓學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)感恩。