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14．假定你是李華，你在網(wǎng)站上看到一則新聞報(bào)導(dǎo)：美國(guó)華裔女生Cassandra因突出的寫(xiě)作水平收到了美國(guó)八所常春藤高校（Ivy League universities）的錄取通知書(shū)．請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給Cassandra寫(xiě)一封信，向她敘述你在英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中的困難，請(qǐng)教提高寫(xiě)作水平的方法，并向她詢問(wèn)出國(guó)留學(xué)可能面臨的挑戰(zhàn)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫．
Dear Cassandra，
I am LiHua，a senior three student in China．I'd like to offer my congratulations．How amazing it is to receive offers from eight Ivy League universities!I will sit the college entrance examination this summer，and I'd appreciate it if you could give me some advice．（高分句型一）
First，I'd like to say it's really a hot potato for me to write in English．The biggest challenge I meet is my Chinglish．My English writing is always puzzling my foreign teacher．How can I write in authentic English？
What's more，I'd like to know what challenges you encountered in a different culture．（高分句型二）Probably I will study abroad，so your advice and experience may be of great value．（高分句型三）
Thank you for your kindness!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于開(kāi)放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息定你是李華，你在網(wǎng)站上看到一則新聞報(bào)導(dǎo)：美國(guó)華裔女生Cassandra因突出的寫(xiě)作水平收到了美國(guó)八所常春藤高校（Ivy League universities）的錄取通知書(shū)．請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給Cassandra寫(xiě)一封信．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：敘述你在英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中的困難，請(qǐng)教提高寫(xiě)作水平的方法，并向她詢問(wèn)出國(guó)留學(xué)可能面臨的挑戰(zhàn)   2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：college entrance examination高考； a hot potato燙手的山芋What's more而且；Probably很可能；be of great value非常有價(jià)值；
How amazing it is to receive offers from eight Ivy League universities!I will sit the college entrance examination this summer，and I'd appreciate it if you could give me some advice．（高分句型一）
What's more，I'd like to know what challenges you encountered in a different culture．（高分句型二）
Probably I will study abroad，so your advice and experience may be of great value．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Cassandra，
       I am LiHua，a senior three student in China．I'd like to offer my congratulations．How amazing it is to receive offers from eight Ivy League universities!I will sit the college entrance examination this summer，and I'd appreciate it if you could give me some advice．（高分句型一）
       First，I'd like to say it's really a hot potato for me to write in English．The biggest challenge I meet is my Chinglish．My English writing is always puzzling my foreign teacher．How can I write in authentic English？
      What's more，I'd like to know what challenges you encountered in a different culture．（高分句型二）Probably I will study abroad，so your advice and experience may be of great value．（高分句型三）
      Thank you for your kindness!
                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．