Question

12．假設(shè)你班最近舉行了一次班會(huì)，討論怎樣把英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)變成一件快樂(lè)的事．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，為某英語(yǔ)周報(bào)網(wǎng)站寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀銈兊挠懻撉闆r并提出你的建議．

討論情況	1．課內(nèi)互動(dòng)
	2．課外活動(dòng)（演講或晚會(huì)等）
	3．運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)（口頭或書(shū)面交流）
	…
你的建議	…

注意：
1．對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)注意陳述，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯．
2．詞數(shù)110左右．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：interactive 互動(dòng)的
Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．                                 

Answer 1

分析 本次作文要求假設(shè)你班最近舉行了一次班會(huì)，討論怎樣把英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)變成一件快樂(lè)的事．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，為某英語(yǔ)周報(bào)網(wǎng)站寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀銈兊挠懻撉闆r并提出你的建議．要點(diǎn)包括：1．課內(nèi)互動(dòng)2．課外活動(dòng)（演講或晚會(huì)等）3．運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)（口頭或書(shū)面交流）4．你的建議． 故既要完成任務(wù)，又要兼顧形式的要求．
寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本篇條理清楚，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．其句式上的變化既使得文章生動(dòng)而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力．例如：賓語(yǔ)從句that there are many ways to do so．定語(yǔ)從句whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，狀語(yǔ)從句because using English is the best way to learn．In this way，communicate with，reasonable and practical．等詞匯及First of all，Secondly，F(xiàn)or example等連接詞．
Secondly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．（高分句型一）
We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen friends on the Internet．（高分句型二）

解答 Recently，we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun．Most students believe that there are many ways to do so．First of all，we can have more interactive activities in class，such as discussions，interviews，story-telling and role-play．In this way，we can have more fun learning English．Secondly，we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people，whether they are English teachers or classmates，foreigners or Chinese，because using English is the best way to learn．（高分句型一）
       These ideas sound reasonable and practical．From my experience，there are many other interesting and relaxing ways．For example，we can listen to English songs and watch English movies．We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen friends on the Internet．（高分句型二）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．