Question

3．假如你是某中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李明，寫一封信給學(xué)校圖書館負(fù)責(zé)老師，因?yàn)槟阈�圖書館將選擇招募課余學(xué)生圖書管理員．信必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
•簡(jiǎn)要介紹個(gè)人特長(zhǎng)
•表達(dá)希望成為課余學(xué)生圖書管理員的愿望
•談?wù)勀阕鳛檎n余學(xué)生圖書管理員，對(duì)學(xué)校圖書館管理提出一些建議
注意：文中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校
Dear Sir/Madam．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封信．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．描述你在高中生活中遇到的最大挑戰(zhàn)； 2．介紹你的應(yīng)對(duì)措施及感悟．寫作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一和第二人稱為主．重要短語(yǔ)：have great interest in （對(duì)…有興趣），in hope of （希望），in one's opinion （某人看來），involve sth （牽連，卷入…），be exposed to （接觸；暴露于；遭受），put something in order （使…有秩序），take notes of（記筆記），a big deal （重要事情），extend the efficiency （提高效率），due to （由于），act as（充當(dāng)，作為…），broaden one's horizon （擴(kuò)大眼界…），admit sb into（允許某人進(jìn)入…），look forward to（期望…）．
【高分句型】
1．thus putting the messy books in good order as well as taking notes of the details in the library work is not a big deal for me．
這里是動(dòng)名詞putting the messy books in good order as well as taking notes of the details in the library work作主語(yǔ)，句子的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是is，表語(yǔ)為not a big deal for me．主語(yǔ)中由as well as連接了兩個(gè)并列的動(dòng)名詞．
2．If accepted，I wonder if the number of school library can be increased．
這里是if從句中的省略，可理解為If I am accepted，主句為I wonder if the number of school library can be increased，主句中是由if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
    I am Li Ming in Grade 3 Class 1．I'm writing to express that I have great interest in the position of an after-school librarian．I have prepared fully in hope of being accepted．（表達(dá)希望成為課余學(xué)生圖書管里員的愿望）
     In my opinion，this job involves patience and responsibility．Having been a member of the students union for two years，I have been exposed to various trivial things，thus putting the messy books in good order as well as taking notes of the details in the library work is not a big deal for me．【高分句型】Moreover，I know to the largest content what the real concept of team work is．Enough emphasis on collective benefits has always helped me extend the efficiency due to my experience in after-school activities．Thus I believe this experience will help me do better if I get this job．（介紹個(gè)人特長(zhǎng)）
      If accepted，I wonder if the number of school library can be increased．【高分句型】We know books act as a way to broaden our horizon，thus the more books we have，the more accesses to knowledge we can have．【高分句型】（對(duì)學(xué)校圖書管里提出一些建議）
      I will appreciate your kindness if you admit me into the after-school librarian group．I am looking forward to  your reply．
Best  regards
Li Ming

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