Question

【題目】假定你是李華，最近你發(fā)現(xiàn)有學(xué)生將共享單車停到了校園內(nèi)并且上了私鎖。請你就此現(xiàn)象，寫一份倡議書發(fā)表在校英文報(bào)上，倡議同學(xué)們文明使用共享單車。

內(nèi)容提示： 1. 共享單車帶給人們的便利；

2. 如何正確使用共享單車。

注意: 1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：共享單車：shared bikes

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Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】My dear fellow students,

Recently I’ve noticed shared bikes, such as Mobike and Ofo, parked in our campus, and even own locks are put on them. Shared bikes bring people great convenience as they provide an effective solution to the “l(fā)ast mile” problem. Hence, shared bikes should be left in public for next users. It is morally wrong that we take possession of one for our own selfish interest. I advocate raising our awareness of using shared bikes reasonably so that everyone can benefit from this service.

Li Hua

【解析】英語倡議書的寫法

倡議書屬于應(yīng)用文的一種，由標(biāo)題、稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾、落款五部分組成。一般用將來時(shí)或一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。題目常會給出標(biāo)題、稱呼、結(jié)尾、落款這四部分，考生只需完成正文即可。這類寫作的正文包括倡議的原因和目的、內(nèi)容以及呼吁。英語倡議書的寫法：

1. 引出倡議原因和目的：提倡開展某項(xiàng)有意義的活動，推行某種行之有效的作法。

2. 列舉倡議內(nèi)容和要求：倡議其實(shí)就是提建議，倡議書中所倡導(dǎo)的活動具有其廣泛性和推廣性。

3. 結(jié)束語。要表示倡議者的決心和希望

寫倡議書時(shí)，盡量使用具有感召力的語言，如名人名句、警句，以及對偶、排比等，提高語言的表達(dá)效果。

亮點(diǎn)說明：本文一開始用一個(gè)長句引出倡導(dǎo)的原因和目的：Recently I’ve noticed shared bikes, such as Mobike and Ofo, parked in our campus, and even own locks are put on them.以這樣的開頭，達(dá)到開篇點(diǎn)題的作用。

接著用一個(gè)由as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語句進(jìn)一步說明共享單車的原因。Shared bikes bring people great convenience as they provide an effective solution to the “l(fā)ast mile” problem.

在列舉倡議的內(nèi)容和要求時(shí)用一個(gè)連詞Hence引出一個(gè)單句：shared bikes should be left in public for next users.再用一個(gè)主語從句說明這種做法的錯誤性；It is morally wrong that we take possession of one for our own selfish interest. 其中it是形式主語，真正的主語是后面的that從句。

最后總結(jié)時(shí)表達(dá)了自己的決心和希望。I advocate raising our awareness of using shared bikes reasonably so that everyone can benefit from this service.本句中使用了一個(gè)由so that引導(dǎo)的狀語從句。

總之本倡議書內(nèi)容完整，比較有感召力。單句和復(fù)句的交替使用，主動和被動的交替使用，更讓文章豐富多彩。