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5．假設(shè)你是某國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生會主席，為增強(qiáng)學(xué)生安全意識，你校本周五下午準(zhǔn)備進(jìn)行一次消防演習(xí)，請你代表學(xué)生會寫一份書面通知，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．活動目的；2．活動時(shí)間；
3．活動安排：①聽到火警鈴后有序撤離 ②聽專業(yè)消防員進(jìn)行安全教育 ③…（內(nèi)容自擬）
4．活動之后，寫出感受．
注意：1．短文詞數(shù)不少于100；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：消防演習(xí)fire drill   消防通道 fire-fighting accesses
消防隱患 potential fire hazard．

Answer 1

分析 這是一份通知，屬于應(yīng)用文的范疇．寫作時(shí)，首先要注意寫全要點(diǎn)，包括：時(shí)間，活動安排，感受；其次要注意用第一人稱；最后要注意時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)為主．
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
provide sth for sb 提供某物給某人
be supposed to 應(yīng)該
put out fires 滅火
in case of 以防萬一
when hearing the fire alarm，everyone should quickly but in order leave buildings through the fire-fighting accesses and go to the playground．
句中when連接一個時(shí)間狀語從句，從句省略了主語和系動詞，即when everyone is hearing the fire alarm．
Then，a professional firefighter will give a lecture about safety knowledge and show us the ways to put out fires．
句中and連接并列謂語．
We should know the skill to escape from the fire in case of emergency．
句中to escape from the fire作目的狀語．

解答 Notice
   A fire drill will be held in our school on Friday afternoon this week in order to improve everyone's awareness of fire safety and provide fire safety training for us．【說明活動】
   We are supposed to perform as follows：when hearing the fire alarm，everyone should quickly but in order leave buildings through the fire-fighting accesses and go to the playground．（高分句型一）Then，a professional firefighter will give a lecture about safety knowledge and show us the ways to put out fires．（高分句型二） After the lecture，all the students should go to inspect the dormitories/classrooms for potential fire hazards and clear them．【具體要求】
   After the activity，every student is asked to give a summary of this fire drill．We should know the skill to escape from the fire in case of emergency．（高分句型三）【總結(jié)感受】
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點(diǎn)評 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．