Question

7．A healthy diet
學(xué)校下周進行健康飲食宣傳教育講座．請你代表班級為這次活動提供一些關(guān)于健康飲食的建議．至少寫出3條建議，以下建議可供 參考：
參考建議：1．健康的飲食應(yīng)該是均衡的 （balanced，sugar，fat）
2．一頓好飯應(yīng)該包含提供能量的，長身體的，保護作用的食物；（meal，energy-giving，body-building）
3．偏胖的人多吃含有纖維素的食物；（fat，fiber，contain）
4．少吃垃圾食品，多吃水果、蔬菜．
【詞數(shù)】100-120之間．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于健康飲食的原因作文，首先提到健康飲食的重要性，其次介紹什么是健康飲食，最后提出合理化的建議．（1）認真審題，確定體裁．本文是議論文． （2）構(gòu)思要點．根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達的要點．設(shè)計好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時態(tài)、人稱等，把要點串聯(lián)起來，構(gòu)成文章框架．（3）選詞造句，避難選易．（4）認真檢查，避免錯誤．仔細閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，注意時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標點是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致．
Secondly，it helps us to be energetic enough to study and work hard．（高級句型）
In order to have a healthy diet，we should first have a reasonable and balanced diet which consists of enough green vegetables and fruit，and for the food high in fat，sugar and salt，we should eat as little as possible because it does great harm to our health．（高級句型）
What's more，a cheerful state of mind and proper physical exercise are equally as important to our health as healthy diet．（高級句型）

解答 Healthy Diet
　　 Healthy diet is very important for us．Firstly，it helps us to keep fit and have a proper weight．Secondly，it helps us to be energetic enough to study and work hard．（高級句型）Finally，it helps to improve the quality of our life．（健康飲食的重要性）
　　 In order to have a healthy diet，we should first have a reasonable and balanced diet which consists of enough green vegetables and fruit，and for the food high in fat，sugar and salt，we should eat as little as possible because it does great harm to our health．（高級句型） A balanced meal includes energy-giving and body-building food，which is necessary to our body．Besides，a fat person should eat food containing less fat and enough fiber and eat less junk food．What's more，a cheerful state of mind and proper physical exercise are equally as important to our health as healthy diet．（高級句型）（什么是健康飲食及建議）

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