Question

【題目】假如你是新華中學高二學生李華，你所在的城市將于7月18日—7月20日舉辦首屆國際單車馬拉松比賽(marathon)。目前，市旅游局正面向社會招募100名志愿者，請寫信給相關(guān)負責人申請該工作。

要點包括：

1. 基本情況；

2. 申請原因；

3. 如何確保出色完成任務？

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。

Dear Sirs,

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sirs,

I am a student who is senior two in Xinhua High School. I am writing to apply for the opportunity of being a volunteer in our city’s First International Bicycle Marathon from July 18th to July 20th.

Firstly, I am in favor of the idea that students take a very important role in the society. Then, as for me, I’m outgoing and willing to get along well with others. What’s more, I am always helpful and warmhearted in my classmates’ eyes. And in my parents’ opinion, I am independent, that is, I have the ability to deal with some certain problems. Finally, I am particularly good at spoken English and have a deep understanding of the cultures of our city and our country, which will greatly help me do the job.

I would be very grateful if you give the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】文章屬于申請信，內(nèi)容是李華寫信給相關(guān)負責人申請國際單車馬拉松比賽(marathon)志愿者工作。申請信要注意格式及結(jié)構(gòu)，首先介紹自己的基本情況，尤其是與馬拉松比賽相關(guān)的自己的特長、優(yōu)點要重點介紹；然后寫明申請原因及如何確保出色完成任務；最后表達自己的愿望，希望給予機會。

寫作時要結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，態(tài)度誠懇，條理清楚。還要注意高級詞匯和句型的運用，比如定語從句whoisseniortwoinXinhuaHighSchool. 和which will greatly help me do the job.同位語從句thatstudentstakeaveryimportantroleinthesociety.不定式表目的toapplyfortheopportunity.

I wouldbeverygratefulif…句型。詞匯 infavorof, takeaveryimportantrole以及第二部分的連接詞Firstly,Then,asfor me,What’smore, thatis, Finally.使文章層次清晰，流暢自然。