Question

【題目】感恩，是我們生活中永恒的話題。假設(shè)你校正在舉行一場有關(guān)“感恩”的演講比賽，請(qǐng)你在“父母、老師、朋友” 中選擇一個(gè)感恩對(duì)象，寫一篇英語演講稿參加比賽。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 為何感恩；

2. 如何感恩。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)120左右；

2．演講稿中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；

3．演講稿的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, …”

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum”

Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love. My mum is an ordinary housewife while I highly appreciate her kind consideration. She keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I’m fortunate to have such a caring mother.

We know the challenging exam to realize dreams is there for me and you. I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our mums. Meanwhile, express your love in return in daily life. Either a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her, and her face will light up.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱式作文。寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。本文根據(jù)寫作要求應(yīng)該分成兩部分：第一部分選擇一個(gè)感恩的對(duì)象，闡明感恩的原因；第二部分說明感恩的方式。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文第二段的第一句直接指明感恩的對(duì)象，并運(yùn)用短語：like many of you，引起大伙的共鳴。在這一段中同時(shí)又運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯如：be blessed with、a source of unconditional love、keep sb. company、on top of等。這一段最后，用一句話總結(jié)了對(duì)母親的感恩之情。最后一段中也同樣使用高級(jí)短語諸如：appeal to sb. to do、in return等等。這是一篇演講稿，句子不求多復(fù)雜，主要是能夠使聽眾能夠理解，產(chǎn)生共鳴。