Question

【題目】隨著車的數(shù)量的增加，道路安全問題變得越來越嚴重。假設(shè)你是李華，是校學(xué)生會主席，請你根據(jù)以下寫作要點，給校報的英語專欄寫一篇英語稿件。

1、列舉街道上常見的交通違規(guī)現(xiàn)象；

2、分析違反交通規(guī)則造成的后果；

3、發(fā)出幾點倡議（至少兩點）

參考詞匯：車行道 roadway

Dear fellow students,

I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student’ Union. I’d like to call your attention to the importance of obeying the traffic rules.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear fellow students,

I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student’ Union. I’d like to call your attention to the importance of obeying the traffic rules.

Nowadays, with the number of vehicles increasing on the road, traffic problems have become part of our life. Some people run the red light at the crossing and others ride their bikes on the roadway. Some drivers drive too fast in the street. All the behavior presents potential danger. If we don’t obey the traffic rules, there might be more traffic jams and accidents.

To keep the traffic smooth, I suggest all the students should obey the traffic rules when walking in the street to make sure we are safe and avoid trouble. Also, I think it necessary to lay stress on the traffic safety education.

Let’s take responsibility for ourselves and others. Let’s take action now.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文，要點已給出。成文時要注意：1.文章主要用第一人稱。2.時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主。3.文章的內(nèi)容要點要齊全：（1）列舉街道上常見的交通違規(guī)現(xiàn)象；（2）分析違反交通規(guī)則造成的后果；（3）發(fā)出幾點倡議（至少兩點）。4.注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.注意使用一些連接詞，使得文章表達自然、流暢。

亮點說明：本文是一篇英文稿件，分四段，內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，布局合理，運用高級句子。with the number of vehicles increasing on the road, traffic problems have become part of our life. with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)用在句中；If we don’t obey the traffic rules, there might be more traffic jams and accidents. If引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句；To keep the traffic smooth, I suggest all the students should obey the traffic rules when walking in the street to make sure we are safe and avoid trou ble.動詞不定式作目的狀語，同時句中使用when+doing作時間狀語；I think it necessary to lay stress on the traffic safety education.動詞不定式作真正賓語；Let’s take responsibility for ourselves and others. Let’s take action now.文章最后用兩個祈使句，恰如其分。