Question

假如你是成都七中的學(xué)生葉子，你的網(wǎng)友Peter聽說美國第一夫人米歇爾(Michelle Obama)訪問了你的學(xué)校，他想了解當(dāng)時(shí)的情況。請(qǐng)按照以下要點(diǎn)給Peter回一封郵件。
1. 具體情況：1）發(fā)表演講并與學(xué)生互動(dòng)；2）與40名學(xué)生上了一堂英語課；
3）參與了一節(jié)太極課。
2. 發(fā)表自己的感想。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；     2．可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好； 4. 參考詞匯：太極------ Tai Chi
Dear Peter,
In the last letter, you’d like to know something about Mrs. Obama’s visit in our school.                                              
Yours sincerely,
Ye Zi

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
In the last letter, you’d like to know something about Mrs. Obama’s visit in our school. Now, I am writing to share some information and my feelings with you.
Mrs. Obama began her visit by giving us a speech, during which she told her own stories, highlighted the importance of education and interacted with us. Then /Afterwards, she participated in an English class with 40 students and had a lively discussion on varieties of topics including how students can deal with competition and failure, the value of studying abroad. What impressed me most is that she observed and actively participated in a Tai Chi class.
Although the First Lady did not spend a long time here, her visit really impressed me and made me know more about American education and culture. I sincerely hope that our school can organize more cultural exchange activities like this to broaden our horizons and enrich our lives.
Yours sincerely,
Ye Zi

考察提綱類作文
【寫作指導(dǎo)】
本文屬于提供類短文，敘述米歇爾(Michelle Obama)訪問成都七中的情況。因?yàn)閿⑹龅氖沁^去發(fā)生的事情，所以使用一般過去時(shí)。因?yàn)楸疚氖且钥忌�自己的口吻寫的，所以使用第一人稱。要點(diǎn)：1）發(fā)表演講并與學(xué)生互動(dòng)；2）與40名學(xué)生上了一堂英語課；3）參與了一節(jié)太極課。4）自己的感想：米歇爾的來訪讓我們感受到了美國文化和教育的特點(diǎn)，希望能夠有更多的這樣的文化交流活動(dòng)。寫作時(shí)首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【一句多譯】
1.Michelle Obama在開始的時(shí)候給我們發(fā)表了一個(gè)演講，在這次演講里，她講述了自己的故事，強(qiáng)調(diào)了教育的重要性并和我們進(jìn)行了交流。
①M(fèi)rs. Obama began her visit by giving us a speech, during which she told her own stories, highlighted the importance of education and interacted with us.
②Mrs. Obama began her visit by giving us a speech. In the speech she told her own stories, highlighted the importance of education and interacted with us.
2.給我留下深刻印象的是她還參加了一節(jié)太極課
①What impressed me most is that she observed and actively participated in a Tai Chi class.
②It impressed me most that she observed and actively participated in a Tai Chi class.