Question

假設(shè)你是正在讀高三的李林，你的好友張華最近給你來(lái)信，想了解你的近況，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封回信，告訴他進(jìn)入高三以來(lái)你學(xué)習(xí)以及生活情況的變化，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度與學(xué)習(xí)壓力的變化；2.時(shí)間安排的變化；3.你后期的打算（兩點(diǎn)）。

注意：1.內(nèi)容包括以上要點(diǎn)，但不要逐句翻譯；

2.字?jǐn)?shù)120左右，文章開(kāi)頭已提供，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Zhang Hua,

I’m happy to have received your letter. Now I’m writing to express my thanks for your care and tell you something about my study and life.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Zhang Hua,

I’m happy to have received your letter. Now I’m writing to express my thanks for your care and tell you something about my study and life.

Since entering Senior Three, a great change has taken place to me. First of all, I’m studying much harder than ever with the purpose of preparing myself for the College Entrance Examination. Besides, so many tests do we face every day that I feel extremely stressful, even lose sleep sometimes at night. What’s more, occupied with my study, I can’t afford any time to take up my hobbies, let alone, playing computer games as before.

However, I have decided that I will try to adjust myself to Senior Three. While studying, I will make wise use of my time. By keeping a balance between study and rest, the learning efficidency, I believe, can be improved and my dream will come true.

Best wishes!                                        Yours

                                                  Li Lin

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)作文。假設(shè)你是正在讀高三的李林，你的好友張華最近給你來(lái)信，想了解你的近況，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封回信，告訴他進(jìn)入高三以來(lái)你學(xué)習(xí)以及生活情況的變化，主要內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度與學(xué)習(xí)壓力的變化；2.時(shí)間安排的變化；3.你后期的打算（兩點(diǎn)）。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】Besides, so many tests do we face every day that I feel extremely stressful, even lose sleep sometimes at night.用了部分倒裝；However, I have decided that I will try to adjust myself to Senior Three.包含一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句；While studying, I will make wise use of my time.現(xiàn)在分詞作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)。

考點(diǎn)：書(shū)信類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)