Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

Not all education can and should happen within the classroom. Sometimes, traveling is the best form of education, as students can get a number of personal and educational benefits from travel. From learning about other cultures first-hand to seeing where historical events took place with their own eyes, educational travel gives students the opportunity to deepen their understanding of art, science, history, and culture in many ways.

Educational becomes a whole new experience when students can see lots of tools and equipment for themselves by traveling to different places. The tools and equipment could be used by scientists decades or even centuries ago to make discoveries that make our modern world possible. Educational travel brings the materials off the pages and into reality, allowing students to connect themselves with them in a more meaningful way.

No matter where students go, it’s almost guaranteed that they’ll find some kind of food that is unique to that place or done better than anywhere else. If someone gets Chicago-style pizza in Chicago, they’re going to have a different tasting experience than they would if they were getting the same type of thing in, say, Texas. At the same time, getting chili in Texas would be a whole different experience from getting chili in New York or Chicago. Students can learn a lot about a culture by what they eat on a daily basis and what they consider a special meal, so it’s good to take a taste of the local food and learn through all of the senses.

Being away from family, home, and familiar ground is a courageous and independent adventure in its own right. Educational travel provides that opportunity to allow students to open their minds regarding how they choose to live life, which can be extraordinarily helpful in preparing students for college and adulthood. Traveling – with the combined social skills and perspectives(視角) it teaches – really allows students to better understand how they can operate on their own.

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Answer 1

【答案】Educational travel can provide students with a number of benefits.(要點1)First, educational travel makes the materials on the book real, which helps students deepen their learning.(要點2)Second, students can taste various foods in their educational travel, thus helping them know about different cultures.(要點3)Third, educational travel encourages students to be more independent and braver, which does good to their future.(要點4)(60 words)

【解析】

本篇考查的作文類型是概要寫作。

文章的主要結(jié)構(gòu)為總-分-總。主要講教育旅游可以為學(xué)生提供許多好處，并具體說明了這些好處是什么。符合概要寫作常規(guī)出題思路。

第一段講述教育旅游可以為學(xué)生提供許多好處�？梢杂玫降脑~匯或句型有：provide sb. with sth., a number of, benefits等。第二段講述教育旅行使書本上的材料真實，幫助學(xué)生加深他們的學(xué)習(xí)。可以用到的詞匯或句式有：materials, deepen, help sb. do sth.等。第三段主要講學(xué)生可以在他們的教育旅行中品嘗各種食物，從而幫助他們了解不同的文化�？梢杂玫降脑~匯或句式有：taste, various, know about, different cultures等。第四段講了教育旅游鼓勵學(xué)生更加獨立和勇敢，這對他們的未來有好處�？梢杂玫降脑~匯或句式有：encourage sb. to do sth., independent, do good to 等。

【高分句型一】

First, educational travel makes the materials on the book real because educational travel helps students deepen their learning. 首先，教育性旅行使書中的材料變得真實，因為教育性旅行幫助學(xué)生加深了他們的學(xué)習(xí)。運用because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

Second, students can taste various foods in their educational travel so that educational travel can help them know about different cultures. 第二，學(xué)生可以在他們的教育旅游中品嘗各種食物，這樣教育旅游可以幫助他們了解不同的文化。運用so that引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句。