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書面表達

你班就“如何防止交通事故的發(fā)生”進行調(diào)查。請根據(jù)此表內(nèi)容寫一短文向政府、駕駛員提出建議；并根據(jù)你的經(jīng)驗給行人提出兩條以上的合理建議。

注意：1．詞數(shù)120詞左右

2．標題、開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不算在總詞數(shù)之內(nèi)

How to Avoid Traffic Accidents

　　We conducted a survey on how to prevent road accidents．Here are some suggestions．

　　As for the government,_________________________________

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　　It is up to all of us to try our best to avoid traffic accidents．The more we work together, the less the accidents will be caused．

Answer 1

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How to Avoid Traffic Accidents 　　We conducted a survey on how to prevent road accidents．Here are some suggestions． 　　As for the government, it needs to improve the bus system so that it will be more convenient and efficient for the passengers to take buses．In order to relieve the crowded traffic, the government should speed up building underground system．At the same time, private cars should be limited, which reduce the heavy traffic．Besides, the drivers should also do something to prevent road accidents．When driving, they must concentrate their attention on driving and never speak on mobile phones．Do not drive too fast through city streets．If you have consumed alcoholic drinks, stop driving．To pedestrians, they should always cross the road on a crossing, remember to look both ways and listen for cars that might not be able to see, and obey traffic lights．(125W) 　　It is up to all of us to try our best to avoid traffic accidents．The more we work together, the less the accidents will be caused． 　　書面表達評分標準： 　　1、本題總分15分，按5個檔次給分。 　　2、評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量。確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。 　　3、詞數(shù)少于80或多于120從總分中減去1分。 　　4、評分時，應(yīng)該注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準確性及上下文的連貫性。連貫性1分 　　5、拼寫和標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面，評分時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯均可接受。 　　6、如果書寫較差，以致影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。 　　內(nèi)容要點： 　　1、完善公共汽車系統(tǒng)，使乘客乘車更加便捷 　　2、加快建設(shè)地鐵系統(tǒng)，緩解地面交通擁擠 　　3、限制私人小汽車，減少車流量 　　4、注意力集中，開車時不打手機 　　5、不開快車 　　6、不酒后開車 　　以上各要點每個1.5分，自由發(fā)揮的兩個要點各2分。