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14．假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華．你的英國朋友Jim 想了解中國人起名字的習慣，并請你幫他起一個中文名字．請給他寫封信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．介紹中國人起名字的習慣；
2．給他起一個中文名字；
3．說明起此名字的理由．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jim，
I am glad to tell you something about the Chinese naming practice．
Unlike your tradition，the family name in China is put first，followed by the given name．（高分句型一）The given name usually contains one or two Chinese characters．Chinese people often name a baby with their best wishes in mind，like wishes for good health，bright future and happiness．Some names imply the birth time，birth place，weather or even a natural phenomenon at the time of the baby's birth．（高分句型二）In terms of choosing the characters，parents still need to consider how they sound when combined into a name．They definitely wouldn't want their child to be teased or given a bad nickname because of the pronunciation．（高分句型三）
As for your Chinese name，how about"吉祥（Ji Xiang）"？The first character has a similar pronunciation to your name Jim，and both of the characters mean"good luck"．You can imagine it：whenever someone calls you"Ji Xiang"，it's like he or she is wishing you good luck．（高分句型四）I hope you'll love this Chinese name．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三學生李華．你的英國朋友Jim 想了解中國人起名字的習慣，并請你幫他起一個中文名字．請給他寫封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：介紹中國人起名字的習慣；給他起一個中文名字；說明起此名字的理由． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Unlike 不像…一樣；at the time of在…的時候；In terms of關(guān)于；because of由于；As for至于；
Unlike your tradition，the family name in China is put first，followed by the given name．（高分句型一）
Some names imply the birth time，birth place，weather or even a natural phenomenon at the time of the baby's birth．（高分句型二）
They definitely wouldn't want their child to be teased or given a bad nickname because of the pronunciation．（高分句型三）
You can imagine it：whenever someone calls you"Ji Xiang"，it's like he or she is wishing you good luck．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Jim，
       I am glad to tell you something about the Chinese naming practice．
       Unlike your tradition，the family name in China is put first，followed by the given name．（高分句型一）The given name usually contains one or two Chinese characters．Chinese people often name a baby with their best wishes in mind，like wishes for good health，bright future and happiness．Some names imply the birth time，birth place，weather or even a natural phenomenon at the time of the baby's birth．（高分句型二）In terms of choosing the characters，parents still need to consider how they sound when combined into a name．They definitely wouldn't want their child to be teased or given a bad nickname because of the pronunciation．（高分句型三）
       As for your Chinese name，how about"吉祥（Ji Xiang）"？The first character has a similar pronunciation to your name Jim，and both of the characters mean"good luck"．You can imagine it：whenever someone calls you"Ji Xiang"，it's like he or she is wishing you good luck．（高分句型四）I hope you'll love this Chinese name．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．