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3．Education Does Count
----Bill GatesHundreds of students send me e-mail each year asking for advice about education．They want to know what to study，or whether it's OK to drop out of college since that's what I did．
My basic advice is simple and heartfelt．"Get the best education you can．Take advantage of high school and college．Learn how to learn．"
It's true that I dropped out of college to start Microsoft，but I was at Harvard for three years before dropping out--and I'd love to have the time to go back．As I've said before，nobody should drop out of college unless they believe they face the opportunity of a lifetime．And even then they should reconsider．
In my company's early years we had a bright part-time programmer who threatened to drop out of high school to work full-time．We told him no．
Quite a few of our people didn't finish college，but we discourage dropping out．
Having a diploma certainly helps someone who is looking to us for a job．
There's not a perfect correlation（相連關(guān)系） between attitudes in high school and success in later life，of course．But it's a real mistake not to take the opportunity to learn a huge range of subjects，to learn to work with people in high school，and to get the grades that will help you get into a good college．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個詞概括短文的內(nèi)容；
2．然后以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓�教育的看法，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）為什么有些學(xué)生想中途放棄學(xué)業(yè)去創(chuàng)業(yè)？
（2）你認(rèn)為讀書與事業(yè)之間的關(guān)系是怎樣的
（3）你自己有何打算？
【寫作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用自己親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
The Author/Bill Gates is often asked to give advice about education due to his successful experience．He thinks it is unwise to drop out and that learning is sure to be beneficial
Some students want to drop out of school，believing schooling has nothing to do witha successful career，because there are many cases where people who don't finish their schooling are successful，such as Bill Gates．Besides，the high tuition of college educationis too much for ordinary families．Dropping out to find a job helps them to lighten the heavy financial burden on theirparents．Furthermore，experience counts most for a career and no wonder some would like to accumulate experience by takinga job at an early age．
"Knowledgeis power．"Without knowledge，by no means canwe achieve our life goal．Schools are where people become knowledgeable．As for me，it is a wise option to concentrate on study from now on．I will make full use of time to complete my schooling and realize my dream．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
Some students want to drop out of school，believing schooling has nothing to do with a successful career，because there are many cases where people who don't finish their schooling are successful，such as Bill Gates
一些學(xué)生想退學(xué)，認(rèn)為學(xué)校教育沒有一個成功的職業(yè)生涯，因為在許多情況下，人們沒有完成他們的教育是成功的，如比爾蓋茨．
高分句型二：
Furthermore，experience counts most for a career and no wonder some would like to accumulate experience by taking a job at an early age．
此外，經(jīng)驗對于事業(yè)十分重要，難怪一些人想通過早年參加工作積累經(jīng)驗．

解答 The Author/Bill Gates is often asked to give advice about education due to his successful experience．He thinks it is unwise to drop out and that learning is sure to be beneficial（概括）
Some students want to drop out of school，believing schooling has nothing to do with a successful career，because there are many cases where people who don't finish their schooling are successful，such as Bill Gates（高分句型一）．Besides，the high tuition of college education is too much for ordinary families．Dropping out to find a job helps them to lighten the heavy financial burden on their parents．Furthermore，experience counts most for a career and no wonder some would like to accumulate experience by taking a job at an early age（高分句型二）．
"Knowledge is power．"Without knowledge，by no means can we achieve our life goal．Schools are where people become knowledgeable．As for me，it is a wise option to concentrate on study from now on．I will make full use of time to complete my schooling and realize my dream．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．