Question

請以Madame Curie為題，寫一篇100個單詞左右的英語短文。要點如下：

1. Madame Curie 是世界著名的女科學家，1867年出生于波蘭（Poland）一個教師家庭，卒于1934年。

2. 她從小愛學習并希望成為科學家，16歲中學畢業(yè)，24歲赴巴黎就讀于巴黎大學，生活簡樸（live a simple life），學習刻苦.

3. 她一生致力于(devote…to)科學研究，于1903年和1911年兩次分別獲諾貝爾物理獎（Nobel Prize for Physics）和諾貝爾化學獎。

4. 一個女人事業(yè)成功不容易，而一生中兩次獲諾貝爾獎更為困難，居里夫人將作為一位偉大的女性永遠為人們所懷念（be remembered as）.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Madame Curie was a world famous woman scientist. She was born in a teacher's family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.

From her early childhood, she loved to study and hoped to become a scientist. She finished middle school at the age of 16. At 24 she left for Paris and entered Paris University. She lived a very simple life and studied very hard.

Madame Curie devoted her whole life to the study of science. She won the Nobel Prize for Physics in 1903 and for Chemistry in 1911.

It is not easy for a woman to succeed in her work. It is even more difficult for a woman to win the Nobel Prize twice. So Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】這篇范文的特點是詞組較多： 如：at the age of 16. A， lived a very simple life

 devoted her whole life to ，won the Nobel Prize for Physics，句型上使用了地道的英語語言： It is not easy for a woman to succeed in her work It is even more difficult for a woman to win the Nobel Prize twice. 這兩句話用了it做形式主語.So Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman.

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