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13．隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)與社會(huì)的發(fā)展，私家車(chē)以及各類(lèi)車(chē)輛的數(shù)量急劇增加，堵車(chē)，新手司機(jī)多，行人以及非機(jī)動(dòng)車(chē)無(wú)視交通規(guī)則等情況導(dǎo)致司機(jī)的路怒癥時(shí)有發(fā)生．
請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇100字左右的文章，簡(jiǎn)要分析怒路癥產(chǎn)生的原因以及如何預(yù)防以及應(yīng)對(duì)路怒癥．（路怒癥Road rage）
As the development of society and economy，the number of the various vehicles is increasing sharply nowdays．However the condition of the roads has not been changed，So we can ofenmeet traffic jam on the road．At the meanwhile many new drivers are on the road，which makes the situation more worse．All of these result in Roadrage．（分析路怒癥產(chǎn)生的原因）
To prevent Roadrage，we should severely publish thedrivers who don't follow the traffic rules．What's more，call on the drivers and pedestrian should keep calm when there is a traffic jam．After all Roadrage can only does no good to everyone．（如何預(yù)防以及應(yīng)對(duì)路怒癥）．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于路怒癥的作文．根據(jù)要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一分析怒路癥產(chǎn)生的原因；二如何預(yù)防以及應(yīng)對(duì)路怒癥．
高分句型：
1．At the meanwhile，many new drivers are on the road，which makes the situation more worse．句子里At the meanwhile表示"同時(shí)"；which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句more new drivers are on the road．
同時(shí)，許多新手上路，這讓情況更加糟糕．
2．To prevent Road rage，we should severely publish the drivers who don't follow the traffic rules．句子里To prevent Road rage是動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)； who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句 don't follow the traffic rules，代指先行詞the driver．
為了預(yù)防路怒癥，我們應(yīng)該嚴(yán)厲的懲罰那些不遵守交通規(guī)則的司機(jī)．

解答 As the development of society and economy，the number of the various vehicles is increasing sharply nowdays．However the condition of the roads has not been changed，So we can ofen meet traffic jam on the road．At the meanwhile，many new drivers are on the road，which makes the situation more worse．【高分句型一】All of these result in Road rage．（分析路怒癥產(chǎn)生的原因）
       To prevent Road rage，we should severely publish the drivers who don't follow the traffic rules．【高分句型二】What's more，call on the drivers and pedestrian to keep calm when there is a traffic jam．After all Road rage can only does no good to everyone．（如何預(yù)防以及應(yīng)對(duì)路怒癥）

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