Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國筆友Steve來信說，他計(jì)劃收藏一些有代表性的中國傳統(tǒng)文化讀本，請你推薦兩本經(jīng)典中文啟蒙教材。根據(jù)下表提供的信息，請你給他寫一封回信。

讀本	千字文	三字經(jīng)
收字	250句，994字	574句，1722字
價(jià)格	12元	18元
特點(diǎn)	全文為四字句，易誦易記，是中國影響很大的兒童啟蒙讀物。	內(nèi)容涵蓋廣，“熟讀《三字經(jīng)》，可知千古事”。

參考詞匯：

1. children’s primer 啟蒙課本

2. Thousand-Character Classic千字文 The Three-Character Classic 三字經(jīng)

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，信的開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Dear Steve,

I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Steve,

I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books. I’d like to recommend the following two popular children's primers.

The first is called Thousand-Character Classic, which has great influence in China and is really a good one for beginners. It has 250 sentences and 994 Chinese words. As each sentence is made up of 4 words, it’s easy to memorize and recite. The other is The Three-Character Classic and it has a collection of 1,722 words. The content of this book covers a wide range of topics. By reading it, you can have a good knowledge of what has happened in the history of China. Of the two, The Three-Character Classic is a little more expensive, costing 18 yuan, while Thousand-Character Classic costs 12 yuan.

Please let me know if you want me to buy these books.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是提綱作文。高考中提綱式作文非常常見。下面是寫提綱式作文的一點(diǎn)技巧。

　 1、審題。審題就是要看清題意，確定文章的中心思想、主題，并圍繞中心思想組織材料。

　 2、進(jìn)行構(gòu)思，列出簡單的提綱，打造文章之骨架，安排好層次段落，鋪設(shè)好過渡，處理好開頭和結(jié)尾。

3、擴(kuò)展成文。擴(kuò)展的內(nèi)容一定要緊扣主題，千萬不要寫那些與主題不相關(guān)的內(nèi)容。

擴(kuò)展成文時還需注意以下方面問題：避免只是用一兩個句式或重復(fù)用同一詞語。要靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，增加文章的可讀性；注意使用高級框架結(jié)構(gòu)的句子，讓文章的結(jié)構(gòu)錯落有致；用好連接詞，注意段落間、句子間的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)分析：第一段中使用了賓語從語：I’m so pleased to learn that you are collecting some traditional Chinese books.，簡明扼要點(diǎn)明寫信的原因。

第二段中一開始就用一個由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句which has great influence in China and is really a good one for beginners.。原因狀語從句：As each sentence is made up of 4 words, it’s easy to memorize and recite.。使用了by引導(dǎo)的非謂語和一個名詞從句：By reading it, you can have a good knowledge of what has happened in the history of China。及由while連結(jié)的狀語從句。在本段中使用了許多高級詞匯如：Have great influence，cover a wide range of topics，have a good knowledge of，a little more expensive。

最后一段使用祈使句+由if引導(dǎo)的狀語結(jié)束了本文。Please let me know if you want me to buy these books.

總之，整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容齊全。句式多變，既有定語從句，名詞從句，也有狀語從句。既有簡單句又有復(fù)合句，句式多變。同時使用了一些高級詞匯，讓文章層次分明，思路清晰，文字連貫，渾然一體。