Question

第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
假定你是李華，昨天學(xué)校為你們舉辦了十八歲成人儀式。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給你在美國的筆友發(fā)一封電子郵件，描述儀式過程并簡述你的感受。
成人宣誓
感謝家長和老師的教育和培養(yǎng)
老師送賀卡
學(xué)生表演節(jié)目
注意：1．郵件必須包括以下要點(diǎn)，要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．詞數(shù)：100左右。
參考詞匯：宣誓 make an oath
Dear Tom,
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Yours，
LiHua

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Tom,
It is great to receive your email. Now I’d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will remember the day in my life.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua

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