Question

3．如圖是小學新生的課堂一角，對照你當時的上課情況，作出比較并談談你的感受．你的作文必須包括：
●描述圖片里學生上課的場景
●比較你同時期的上課情況
●簡單談談你的感受．

Answer 1

分析 本文是看圖作文，根據所提供的一幅圖和所給要點信息談談課堂教育的感受，屬于提綱作文．在寫作時人稱用第一人稱和第三人稱．時態(tài)為一般過去時和一般現在時．重要短語：raise their hands （舉手…） compared with…（與…作比較），take notes （記筆記），far from（遠非，絕不是），account for （解釋…），get into the habit of （養(yǎng)成…習慣），learn from each other（相互學習）．

解答 As is shown in the picture，a group of foreign students are raising their hands to give answers to the question in a joyful and active way．（描述圖片）
Compared with their performance，the classes when I was a pupil were far from active．Hardly did classmates raise their hands．【高分句型】Instead，we stayed quiet in class，keeping taking notes and listening to what the teacher was talking in a careful way．【高分句型】For my point，the following reason can account for this phenomenon．（比較）
What matters most is the education system in China．【高分句型】The first day we become the primary student．Our teachers make it a rule that we put our hands back and stay quiet in class．In addition，lecture-model teaching is the traditional way in Chinese class．Teachers are the leading actor or actress and students are always the supporting roles．Gradually we get into the habit of staying quiet in class and lose the ability to raise questions and give the answers．
From what has been outlined above，there is no doubt that Chinese and foreign students are different from each other in the way of study and we should learn from each other to improve our study．（感受）

點評 看圖作文要求將畫面及要點所包含的有效信息用文字表達出來，并適當拓展并發(fā)揮想象．如果是記敘文類的素材，要注意故事的時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、過程、結果這六個要素；如果是說明文或議論文，首先要對圖畫的內容進行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進行說明或議論．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．