Question

18．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
Eat your vegetables．Wash your hands．Always say"please"and"thank you"．We are full of advice for our children，but when it comes to money，we often have little to say．As a result，our children may grow up with clean hands and good manners，but without any idea how to manage their money．Here are some basics that will help guide them their entire lives：
Show them the future．If your 13-year-old girl were to save﹩100，put it in the bank at 8% interest and add﹩10 every month，by the time she's 65，she would have﹩98，098!Be careful of credit．Credit cards can help you buy necessary things and build a credit history，but they must be used responsibly，which means paying off your debt in time．Explain to your children that when you buy something using a credit card，you can easily end up paying two or three times what you would have paid if you used cash．
    Teach patience．Suppose your child wants a new bicycle that costs﹩150．Rather than you paying the cash，give him some regular pocket money and explain that by putting aside，say，﹩15each week，he will be able to buy it for himself in only ten weeks．
Provide encouragement．Tell your children the importance of saving．And for every dollar he or she agrees to save and invest rather than spend，you agree to add another dollar to the pot．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1）以約30個詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；
2）然后以約120個詞就"父母教小孩理財(cái)"這一話題發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容包括：
①你認(rèn)為父母是否應(yīng)該教小孩理財(cái)？為什么？
②如果應(yīng)該，那么在小孩幾歲的時(shí)候教他們理財(cái)？用什么形式理財(cái)？如果不應(yīng)該，那么等到孩子多大時(shí)教他們理財(cái)？用什么形式理財(cái)？
③結(jié)合你小時(shí)候關(guān)于理財(cái)?shù)那闆r來說明你的觀點(diǎn)．
[寫作要求]
1）在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2）作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語：point out（指出），be patient（耐心），make purchases（購買），manage money （理財(cái)），get in debt（欠債），begin doing （開始做某事），accompany sb（陪伴某人），open an account（開一個賬號），ask sb to do（叫某人做某事），pay for（付給），thanks to（多虧了），waste money on（在…浪費(fèi)錢）．
【高分句型一】
1．①keeping responsible credit and being patient ②when making purchases will help them have a better future．
①此處是兩個并列的動名詞短語"keeping responsible credit and being patient"作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．
②此處是時(shí)間狀語從句中的省略，可以理解為"when we are making purchases"．
【高分句型二】
1．Parents may accompany their children to the bank and help them open an account in which they can save their lucky money．
此處是由"in which"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"an account"，從句中不缺少主、賓、表等主要成分，缺少地點(diǎn)狀語．
【高分句型三】
3．This can be used to pay for their schooling，which will help them understand the true value of money．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 As the author points out，teaching children to save money，keeping responsible credit and being patient when making purchases will help them have a better future．【高分句型一】（概括）
In my opinion，it is essential for parents to teach children how to manage their money responsibly before they move out of home．Without such knowledge，people will not be able to maximize the quality of their life and may even get in debt．（選擇的理由）
I think five to six is an appropriate age to begin teaching children money management skills．Parents may accompany their children to the bank and help them open an account in which they can save their lucky money．【高分句型二】This can be used to pay for their schooling，which will help them understand the true value of money．【高分句型三】（小孩幾歲的時(shí)候教他們理財(cái)？用什么形式理財(cái)？）
This is exactly what my parents asked me to do when I was young and thanks to them I don't waste my money on frivolous or unnecessary purchase．（觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．