Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改 10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

With the development of the Internet, more and more children are addicted to play online games day and night. It does harm not only to their health, especial their eyes, but also to their studies.

Comparing with online games, many traditional games benefits kids mentally and physically. They were very popular to several generations, for they learned something valuable and had a fun playing the games. Therefore, the games are losing our appeal now, and some children even haven’t heard of them.

Personally, I think teachers and parents should take measure to limit their children's Internet time. Let children know harm of online games and the benefits of traditional games. What's more, we should often organize traditional activities for children.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】play→playing

【2】especial→especially

【3】Comparing→Compared

【4】benefits→benefit

【5】to→with

【6】had a fun刪去 a

【7】Therefore→However

【8】our→their

【9】measure→ measures

【10】know和 harm之間加the

【解析】

【試題分析】

【1】play→playing 句意：隨著因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的孩子對(duì)玩網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲上癮。are addicted to對(duì)…上癮，這里to是介詞，故play→playing。

【2】especial→especially本題考察副詞。 句意：網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲不僅對(duì)他們身體有害，特別是眼睛，而且對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)有害。這里用副詞作狀語(yǔ)，故especial→especially。

【3】Comparing→Compared 句意：和網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲相比，很多傳統(tǒng)的游戲有益于孩子的身心健康。compared to/with和…相比。故Comparing→Compared。

【4】 benefits→benefit 考察主謂一致。此句主語(yǔ)many traditional games復(fù)數(shù)名詞，故benefits→benefit。

【5】to→with句意：它們受幾代人的歡迎。be popular with受……歡迎，故to→with。

【6】had a fun刪去 a 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。had fun玩的開心。這里fun是不可數(shù)名詞，故刪去 a。

【7】Therefore→However 句意：但是這些游戲正在失去它們的吸引力。根據(jù)句意可知Therefore→However。

【8】our→their句意：但是這些游戲正在失去它們的吸引力。根據(jù)句意可知our→their。

【9】 measure→ measures句意：我認(rèn)為老師和家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)該采取措施來(lái)限制孩子們的上網(wǎng)時(shí)間。take measures采取措施，故measure→ measures。

【10】know和 harm之間加the本題考察冠詞。句意：讓孩子們了解網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的害處以及傳統(tǒng)游戲的益處。這里害處和益處都是特指the harm of online games和the benefits of traditional games。故know和 harm之間加the。