Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)某天發(fā)生在校園中的一個(gè)情景，先對(duì)漫畫“垃圾筒旁邊的垃圾”的內(nèi)容迸行簡(jiǎn)要描 述，然后對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象簡(jiǎn)要發(fā)表自己的看法并提出一些倡議。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。

要求：1．適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語言連貫。 2．詞數(shù)100詞左右。

參考詞匯：社會(huì)公德social morality 缺乏(n. vt.) lack

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One day a boy was eating a banana in the campus. After eating it up, he wanted to throw the skin into the dustbin, but it dropped outside. Although the dustbin was near/The dustbin being near, he didn’t want to take any trouble to pick it up but went away directly, thinking that someone else would clean the rubbish. The banana skin smelt bad after a while.

Obviously, what the boy did shows a lack of social morality. Nowadays some people consider it of little value to observe social morality and become more selfish and indifferent. We need to take action to develop a sound system which advocates good behaviours and keep all necessary disciplines and requirements in mind, thus creating a harmonious social environment benefiting others as well as ourselves. Personally, the most effective way is that we should raise people’s awareness and act morally individually.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇漫畫作文。根據(jù)某天發(fā)生在校園中的一個(gè)情景，先對(duì)漫畫“垃圾桶旁邊的垃圾”的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要描述，然后對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象簡(jiǎn)要發(fā)表自己的看法并提出一些倡議。寫作時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色，注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)在100詞左右，不要太多或太少。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】Obviously, what the boy did shows a lack of social morality.包含了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句，并運(yùn)用了obviously/a lack of這樣的高級(jí)詞匯、短語；Although the dustbin was near/The dustbin being near, he didn’t want to take any trouble to pick it up but went away directly, thinking that someone else would clean the rubbish.包含了although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，并運(yùn)用了非謂語動(dòng)詞thinking---作狀語；We need to take action to develop a sound system which advocates good behaviours and keep all necessary disciplines and requirements in mind, thus creating a harmonious social environment benefiting others as well as ourselves.包含了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，thus后的非謂語動(dòng)詞creating---在句中作結(jié)果狀語。