Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，上周你校為高三學(xué)生隆重地舉行了 “成人禮”。你以前的外教Kate得知這消息后很感興趣。請你給她寫封信，描述這一盛事。 要點(diǎn)包括：

1. 活動時間：上周五上午9:00-11:30

2. 活動地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校大禮堂

3. 活動內(nèi)容：齊唱國歌、父母期望……

4. 活動意義：感恩、奉獻(xiàn)……

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

參考詞匯：成人禮 coming-of- age ceremony

Dear Kate,

I'm so glad to learn that you show great interest in the coming-of-age ceremony held by our school recently.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Kate,

I'm so glad to learn that you show great interest in the coming-of-age ceremony held by our school recently. Now let me tell you about it in great detail.

It was carried out in the great hall of our school between 9: 00 and 11: 30 a. m. last Friday. At the beginning of the activity, all the students present sang the national song together. Then followed the blessings and wishes from the elders. Meanwhile, the parents also expressed their high expectations of their children. Afterwards, the student representative delivered a speech on the stage. Finally, the school headmaster concluded the whole event.

The coming-of-age ceremony is significant and meaningful. Through this activity, the students, being adults, have a stronger sense of responsibility and gratitude. They have realized they should learn to serve the people and make contributions to society in the near future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一封介紹信。

第一步：審題：這篇文章是提綱類作文。要求你以李華的身份給以前的外教Kate她寫封信，描述學(xué)校的成人禮這一盛事。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)1. 活動時間：上周五上午9:00-11:30；2. 活動地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校大禮堂3. 活動內(nèi)容：齊唱國歌、父母期望……；4. 活動意義：感恩、奉獻(xiàn)……

第二步： 關(guān)聯(lián)詞（組）：Meanwhile,…. Afterwards, …. Finally,….

第三步：關(guān)鍵詞（組）：At the beginning of…在…的開始； coming-of- age ceremony成人禮；carry out 實(shí)施；the national song唱國歌；make contributions to…對…做出貢獻(xiàn) 等

第四步：連詞成句：

1.I'm so glad to learn that you show great interest in the coming-of-age ceremony held by our school recently.

2.Through this activity, the students, being adults, have a stronger sense of responsibility and gratitude.

3.They have realized they should learn to serve the people and make contributions to society in the near future.

第五步：要注意字?jǐn)?shù)恰當(dāng)，過渡自然，需要寫的內(nèi)容以要點(diǎn)形式已給出，但寫作時不要拘泥于對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯。而是要添加些細(xì)節(jié)，使文章看起來更充實(shí)。要組成通順連貫的短文，務(wù)必要試試自己的看法。