Question

8．近些年來，隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，越來越多的學生的書寫能力明顯退步了．為了改變這種局面，保護傳統(tǒng)民族文化------漢字，我校學生會提出以下倡議：
1、減少課外上網(wǎng)時間，多讀書；
2、養(yǎng)成每天記日記的好習慣，練習書寫；
3、少發(fā)電子郵件，盡量動手給親朋好友寫書信．
請你根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容，代學生會寫一封英文倡議書．
注意：1、詞數(shù)：100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
      2、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：普及：popularity  漢字：Chinese characters  
          養(yǎng)成…的習慣：form the habit of
Dear friends，
                                                                                                                                                
Let's take action now!
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting，we'd like to offer some suggestions．為了保護中國的民族文化提高書寫水平，我們提出以下建議：
高分句型二：
First，we should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books．
首先，我們應(yīng)該少花時間在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上，那樣才有更多的時間來閱讀．
句型一 In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting…該句在句首使用了固定短語：in order to do sth 為了…放在句首作目的狀語
句型二 so that we can have more time to read books  該句是一個由so that 引導的目的狀語從句
除此以外，還有以下短語和高級詞匯：what's more 而且     form the habit of doing sth 養(yǎng)成．．習慣

解答 In recent years，many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity．As a result，we don't write as well as we did in the past．In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（提出話題）（高分句型一）
    First，we should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books．（高分句型二）Besides，we'd better form the habit of keeping diaries every day to practice handwriting．What's more，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（方法展示）
    As the saying goes，"The style is the man．"Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students．So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future．
    Let's take action now!
                                                                                     Students'Union

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．