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17．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：
1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Today I'd like to tell you something that I experience in the City Park．In the afternoon of last Sunday，my friend and I were taking a walk along a river in the City Park，when suddenly we heard a boy call for help in the river．We jumped into the river or pulled the boy out．Then we made him to breathe using the mouth-to-mouth way．After a while，the boy came to himself，we sent her to hospital at once and telephoned his parents．The boy was saved．His parents were very thankful us and the doctors thought high of our first aid．From this，we realized that knowing first aid is  help and important because it can help us to save lives．

Answer 1

分析 本文為記敘文，講述了作者在城市公園救了一個(gè)落水男孩的故事．

解答 Today I'd like to tell you something that I experience in the City Park．In the afternoon of last Sunday，my friend and I were taking a walk along a river in the City Park，when suddenly we heard a boy call for help in the river．We jumped into the river or pulled the boy out．Then we made him to breathe using the mouth-to-mouth way．After a while，the boy came to himself，∧we sent her to hospital at once and telephoned his parents．The boy was saved．His parents were very thankful∧us and the doctors thought high of our first aid．From this，we realized that knowing first aid is help and important because it can help us to save lives．
詳解：
1．答案experience改為experienced．考查時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)后文"the afternoon of last Sunday"可知，作者經(jīng)歷的這件事發(fā)生在過去，用一般過去時(shí)，用experienced．
2．答案In改為On．考查介詞．在具體的某一天，介詞用on．此處指上個(gè)星期天的下午，故用on．in用于泛指的早上、下午、晚上，沒有具體的哪一天．
3．答案call改為calling．考查動(dòng)詞V-ing形式．hear sb．doing sth．聽見某人正在做某事（正在進(jìn)行）．hear sb．do sth．聽見某人做某事（整個(gè)過程）．此處指我們聽見一個(gè)男孩在喊救命，聽見的時(shí)候，call這個(gè)動(dòng)作正在發(fā)生，故用calling．
4．答案or改為and．考查連詞．根據(jù)前后文關(guān)系，我們跳入河中，并把男孩拉了出來．前后位并列遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，用and．
5．答案him后去掉to．考查動(dòng)詞不定式．make sb．do sth．讓某人做某事．去掉to．
6．答案we sent前加and．考查連詞．the boy came to himself為一句話，we sent her to hospital at once and telephoned his parents為另一句話，兩句話之間須有連詞，此處加and，為并列關(guān)系，男孩醒了，我們送他去醫(yī)院．
7．答案her改為him．考查代詞．根據(jù)前文"the boy came to himself"可知，此處指代the boy，故her改為him．
8．答案thankful后加to．考查介詞．be thankful to sb．感謝某人，感激某人．
9．答案high改為highly．考查副詞．think highly of 為固定詞組，意為"高度贊揚(yáng)，高度評(píng)價(jià)"．
10．答案help改為helpful．考查形容詞．is為be動(dòng)詞，be動(dòng)詞后多用形容詞作表語，故help改為形容詞helpful．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)口訣：名詞數(shù)、動(dòng)詞形．形副互混辯分明．介詞多用錯(cuò)與少，連詞轉(zhuǎn)折與平行，冠詞錯(cuò)誤常出現(xiàn)，代詞前后易錯(cuò)亂．邏輯錯(cuò)誤偶爾有，認(rèn)真閱讀別遺漏．