Question

作為中學(xué)生的你，在生活中碰到了兩個問題：

1、你的父母對你要求近似乎苛刻，總要求你取得好成績。盡管你已經(jīng)養(yǎng)成了每天彈一小時(shí)鋼琴的習(xí)慣，但父母卻要求、甚至威脅你不要彈鋼琴，多把注意力放到英語學(xué)習(xí)上；

2、你為自己的體重感到羞愧。盡管你已經(jīng)聽從醫(yī)生的建議“多運(yùn)動、少飲食”了，但還是在發(fā)胖。為此你感到很窘迫，明知吃減肥藥對身體有害，但還想冒險(xiǎn)一試。

請以Worried Angel的名義向Mr. Advice寫一封120詞左右的求助信。

注意：

文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入文章的總詞數(shù)；

Dear Mr. Advice，

I am quite upset by two problems and don’t know how to deal with them.

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Please give me some suggestions on how to get out of the boring life.

Sincerely yours,

Worried Angel

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Advice:

I am quite upset by two problems and don’t know how to deal with them.

My parents are hard on me and always want me to achieve high grades at school. Though I have developed a habit of playing the piano for one hour every day, my parents just require me to pay more attention to English study. They even want to punish me if I don’t drop it.

I am quite ashamed of my weight. I follow doctors’ advice and insist on working out every day, I pay attention to my diet as well, but I am still putting on weight! My weight just makes me feel embassassed all the time. Do I really have to risk my health for a slim figure and take some weight-loss pills? They have side effects on our health!

Please give me some suggestions on how to get out of the terrible situation.

Sincerely yours,

Worried Angel

【解析】

試題分析：本文考查了提綱類作文的寫作，作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類短文寫作

點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。