Question

【題目】假如你是育才中學(xué)的一名英國交換生Tom。為了放松心情、結(jié)交朋友并了解中國的風(fēng)土人情，

你計劃這個假期去云南大理、麗江旅游。請根據(jù)以下要點撰寫一篇博文尋找中國學(xué)生作為旅游伙伴：

1．時間： 2月2 1日-2月26日；

2．對旅伴的要求；

3．聯(lián)系方式：電話：13012345678; E-mail:tommy1999@163.com.

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

I'm Tom, a British exchange student at Yucai High School.

Looking forward to meeting you.

Answer 1

【答案】

I’m Tom, a British exchange student at Yucai High School. I am planning to take a six-day tour of Dali and Lijiang, Yunnan Province, starting from February 21.

I’d like to find an outgoing and enthusiastic companion from a Chinese high school, who has a good knowledge of Chinese culture, especially about Yunnan local minorities. Besides, it would be nice if you have some experience in traveling. Above all, your good command of English will make sure free communication between us can happen. I sincerely hope we can relax, enjoy ourselves, make friends as well as improve our cross-cultural communication skills during this experience.

If anyone is interested, please contact me at 13012345678 or send me an E-mail to tommy1999@163.com.

Looking forward to meeting you!

【解析】這是一篇廣告文寫作。主要說明自己對旅伴的要求，以及希望從這次活動中能夠得到一些收獲。題目已經(jīng)給定大致內(nèi)容，寫作時要注意適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，以保證文章的連貫性。第二段第一句” I’d like to find an outgoing and enthusiastic companion from a Chinese high school, who has a good knowledge of Chinese culture,”使用了定語從句來修飾companion，使得表達(dá)更加的豐富，有層次。第二段第三句” it would be nice if you have some experience in traveling.”運用了if從句，語氣顯得委婉，更容易讓人接受。同時句子與句子之間用”especially”、”besides”、”above all”等不同的副詞來連接，顯得不單調(diào)。第二段倒數(shù)第二句，使用sincerely比用really更文雅。第二段最后一句“I sincerely hope we can relax, enjoy ourselves, make friends as well as improve our cross-cultural communication skills during this experience.”運用了as well as 句型來連接兩個句子，比光用and來連接更好，讓人感覺表達(dá)更書面化。最后要把聯(lián)系方式寫出來，這樣作文就完整了。