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假如你們學(xué)�！坝⒄Z愛好者俱樂部”將對(duì)“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話題進(jìn)行討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：

部分同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣	良好的飲食習(xí)慣	個(gè)人看法
不吃早餐 愛吃零食 偏食 飲食過量	飲食多樣化 飲食定時(shí)適量	重要性：有助于身體健康……

注意：

發(fā)言稿必須包括表格中所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

發(fā)言稿開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

詞數(shù)：120左右；

參考詞匯：偏食 be particular about food 零食 snack適量 proper amounts of 

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.

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That’s all. Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear friends,

As we all know we are what we eat. Therefore it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.

However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast, some like to have snacks, some others are particular about food, and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides we’d better have meals regularly.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于議論文，讓學(xué)生就“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話題進(jìn)行討論。同時(shí)也屬于提綱類短文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中有一個(gè)非常好的句子：Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

運(yùn)用了這個(gè)only引導(dǎo)的倒裝句來收尾，讓結(jié)尾很有力。同時(shí)文章中的高級(jí)短語運(yùn)用也較多，如：be particular about；do harm to等等。

考點(diǎn)：考察提綱類短文閱讀