Question

【題目】假定你是李華，近期你所在城市的空氣質(zhì)量越來(lái)越差。某英文報(bào)紙就此現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行征稿。請(qǐng)你簡(jiǎn)要分析空氣污染的原因，并提出有效的解決措施。內(nèi)容包括：

1．分析原因；

2．解決措施；

3．呼吁。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Recently the air quality of the city I live in is becoming worse and worse. _________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently the air quality of the city I live in is becoming worse and worse. It does great harm to people’s health. The reasons for the serious air pollution are as follows.

Firstly, some factories give off waste gases into the air. Besides, some people’s bad behaviour is the source of air pollution, such as smoking, spitting and throwing the rubbish everywhere.

Effective measures should be taken to reduce air pollution. On the one hand, strict laws must be made to punish those factories which are still polluting the air. On the other hand, it’s every citizen’s duty to go out by bus instead of using private cars.

Personally speaking, all of us should spare no effort to devote ourselves to improving the air quality to make our living environment clean and beautiful.

【解析】試題分析：

本文是寫(xiě)給報(bào)社的征稿，針對(duì)近期所在城市的空氣質(zhì)量越來(lái)越差，分析空氣污染的原因，并提出有效的解決措施。文章給出了提綱，成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全，三方面內(nèi)容齊全：1.分析原因;2.提出解決措施;3.呼吁。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

1.使用高級(jí)句型：被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的使用Effective measures should be taken to reduce air pollution.；使用了定語(yǔ)從句On the one hand, strict laws must be made to punish those factories which are still polluting the air..；it做形式主語(yǔ)On the other hand, it’s every citizen’s duty to go out by bus instead of using private cars.2.使用了過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)：Firstly，Besides，On the one hand，On the other hand等。3.使用了重要短語(yǔ)：do harm to對(duì)…造成傷害；as follows列舉如下；give off釋放，發(fā)出；instead of而不是，代替；spare no effort不遺余力。