Question

11．假定你是李華，你的加拿大筆友Wendy來信說她打算暑假期間來你所在的城市游玩，想讓你為她推薦景點(diǎn)．請你用英語給她回信，內(nèi)容包括下列要點(diǎn)：
1．表示歡迎；
2．推薦兩個(gè)景點(diǎn)，說明理由；
3．告知你的安排，征求她的意見．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Wendy，
I'm glad to learn you're coming to my city during the summer vacation．
Here I express my warmest welcome．Now I'll introduce two famous tourist attractions to you．
First，I'd like to recommend the Erqi Memorial Tower．It was built to mark the great strike that took place on February 7^th，1923．Becauseof its history，it's become the symbol of the city．They other place is Shao lin Temple，which is well known for its Wushu all over the world．Every year many foreigners come to visit it．
After you arrive，I'll show you around the two places．Besides，we'llvisit some other interesting places and enjoy local flavor snacks．What do you think of my arrangement？If you plan to do something else，just let me know
Looking forward to your early reply．
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
They other place is Shao lin Temple，which is well known for its Wushu all over the world
另一個(gè)地方是少林寺，以武術(shù)聞名世界．
高分句型二：
Besides，we'll visit some other interesting places and enjoy local flavor snacks．
此外，我們將參觀其他一些有趣的地方，享受當(dāng)?shù)氐娘L(fēng)味小吃．

解答 Dear Wendy，
I'm glad to learn you're coming to my city during the summer vacation．Here I express my warmest welcome．Now I'll introduce two famous tourist attractions to you．
First，I'd like to recommend the Erqi Memorial Tower．It was built to mark the great strike that took place on February 7^th，1923．Because of its history，it's become the symbol of the city．They other place is Shao lin Temple，which is well known for its Wushu all over the world（高分句型一）．Every year many foreigners come to visit it．
After you arrive，I'll show you around the two places．Besides，we'll visit some other interesting places and enjoy local flavor snacks（高分句型二）．What do you think of my arrangement？If you plan to do something else，just let me know．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Sincerely yous，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．