Question

有一批要到中國(guó)投資的外國(guó)企業(yè)家在我國(guó)某城市參觀(guān)考察。假定你是接待員，要向外賓們介紹這個(gè)城市的概括。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，須包括以下內(nèi)容：

這是一座新興的現(xiàn)代化城市，建于20世紀(jì)80年代；

海陸空交通方便，又有一條與首都北京相連的高速公路；

自然資源豐富，電力及其他能源供應(yīng)充足；

公共秩序良好，政府多方面支持外國(guó)投資者。

注意：1 詞數(shù)：100左右。

      2 可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，但不能逐字翻譯。

3 短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：高速公路：freeway    公共秩序：public order  

投資者：investor 供應(yīng)supplies of

Ladies and Gentlemen,

  Welcome to our city. Now let me introduce …

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Ladies and Gentlemen,

  Welcome to our city. Now let me introduce our city to you. Our city is a newly-built modern city. It was set up in the early 1980s, but it has been developing rapidly. From here you can travel to anywhere by water, by air or by land. Recently another freeway which is connected with Beijing has started being used. The areas around our city are rich in natural resources. And we have enough supplies of electricity and other forms of energy. The public order is very nice. Besides, the governments of our country and our city support foreign investors in many aspects. We expect more and more friends to come and invest in our city.

  That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題解析：從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)的是對(duì)這座城市的簡(jiǎn)單介紹。文章內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：這是一座新興的現(xiàn)代化城市，建于20世紀(jì)80年代；海陸空交通方便，又有一條與首都北京相連的高速公路；自然資源豐富，電力及其他能源供應(yīng)充足；公共秩序良好，政府多方面支持外國(guó)投資者。時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；注意使用連詞和高級(jí)詞匯、句型。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

文章使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子給文章增色，如Recently another freeway which is connected with Beijing has started being used.(定語(yǔ)從句)，but it has been developing rapidly（現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)）并且主語(yǔ)了句子的銜接如：but，And ,besides,等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文寫(xiě)作。