Question

【題目】隨著人們生活水平提高，越來(lái)越多的人喜愛(ài)旅游度假。最近你班學(xué)生就假期旅游的利弊問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查，請(qǐng)就調(diào)查結(jié)果寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容主要有：

1.假期旅游的好處：工作之余放松；開(kāi)闊眼界豐富知識(shí)。

2.假期旅游的壞處：污染環(huán)境；造成交通問(wèn)題。

3.你的觀點(diǎn)。

注意: 1.詞數(shù)120左右；

2.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.可適當(dāng)用語(yǔ)，以使行文連貫

With people’s lives becoming richer and richer，

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Answer 1

【答案】

With people’s lives becoming richer and richer, more and more people love travelling to spend their holiday. We have made a survey on it in our class recently. Different students have different ideas.

Most of the students hold the view that it has many advantages to travel. Firstly, we can have an access to relax ourselves. Secondly, travelling different places, we can broaden our mind and enrich our knowledge.

However, some students believe that people’s travelling does great harm to the environment. In addition, so many people travel at the same time, which naturally causes traffic problems.

In my opinion, every coin has two sides. While we’re on holiday, we’d better be careful to avoid polluting the environment. Then we can enjoy ourselves.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)make a survey做調(diào)查；have an access to有做某事的機(jī)會(huì)；do harm to 對(duì)，，有害；In addition此外；in one’s opinion在某人看來(lái)；Most of the students hold the view that it has many advantages to travel.這個(gè)句子that引導(dǎo)view的同位從句；In addition, so many people travel at the same time, which naturally causes traffic problems這個(gè)句子which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；