Question

 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的內(nèi)容寫一篇人物簡(jiǎn)介。完整地表達(dá)所有的信息點(diǎn)，字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。

人物簡(jiǎn)介	李娜，1982年2月26 tl出生，從小就對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)有天賦，6歲幵始練習(xí)羽毛球，9歲轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)網(wǎng)球。
主要經(jīng)歷及獲得榮譽(yù)	1. 2002年：離開網(wǎng)球場(chǎng)，到大學(xué)讀書；兩年后重返球場(chǎng)； 2. 在包括她丈夫在內(nèi)的幾位著名教練的指導(dǎo)下，進(jìn)步神速； 3. 2011年:法國(guó)公開賽女子單打冠軍，第一位獲得大滿貫賽事單打冠軍的亞洲網(wǎng)球選手。
別人對(duì)她的評(píng)價(jià)	1. 堅(jiān)定的信心，履行諾言； 2. 你的評(píng)價(jià)……

?生詞提更

French Open法閏公開賽singles title女單冠軍Grand Slam大滿貫?寫作支招

一) 寫作定性

本文為簡(jiǎn)單介紹人物的文章，也即人物傳記。要求簡(jiǎn)介人物的生平，業(yè)績(jī)及別人對(duì)其評(píng)價(jià)。時(shí)態(tài)多為一般過(guò)去式，現(xiàn)在時(shí)。表達(dá)以陳述句為多。這類文章通常按照時(shí)間順序來(lái)組織。從寫作要求可看出文章內(nèi)容里既要包括對(duì)人物的生平的介紹，還要包括他人的評(píng)價(jià)及作者自己的主觀看法。文章可分為兩段，一為李娜的經(jīng)歷成就，二為對(duì)李娜的評(píng)價(jià)。

二) 難點(diǎn)突破

1.可用詞匯

childhood, practice, badminton, coach, introduce, has a gift for,took a break,with the help of,under the guidance of,follow the instructions of,making achievements/ progress/ im?provement ( s) ，regard ... as,strong determination/mind, think highly of,keep one's word

2.結(jié)構(gòu)模仿

敘述經(jīng)歷和成績(jī)：運(yùn)用諸多短語(yǔ)和分詞結(jié)構(gòu)使語(yǔ)言地道簡(jiǎn)潔。

Asimov's life began in Russia, where he was born on 2 January, 1920.(人教新課標(biāo)教材選修⁷,16頁(yè))

It was when Asimov was eleven old that his talent for writing became obvious.(人教新課標(biāo)教材選修7,16頁(yè))

With the help /Under the guidance of these good teachers, including Mr. Smith /Following the instructions of several good teachers, Henry has been making greater and greater achieve?ments/ progress/ improvement") rapidly in painting.

He won the competition，becoming the first Chinese who got a gold medal for China.

對(duì)人物的評(píng)價(jià)：運(yùn)用regard ... as和in my opinion,I think等清晰地表明觀點(diǎn)和評(píng)價(jià)。

Many people regard him as one of the most important leaders in the 20th century and think highly of his contributions to his motherland.

In my opinion/view，he is really a great man.

I think that he is not only intelligent but also very brave.

What impressed me most was his courage when facing the coming danger.

3.參考句型

sb. has a gift for sth.對(duì)某事有天分

With the help of sb.…在某人的幫助下……

sb. made great progress/achievements/improvements取得巨大的進(jìn)步/成就/提高

sb. is regarded as...某人被看做.....

think highly of sb.高度評(píng)價(jià)/贊揚(yáng)某人

What impressed sb. most was...給某人留下印象的是.....

 一試身手

Answer 1

 Li Na's life began in Wuhan,where she was born on 26 January, 1982. It was when she was six years old that she began to play badminton and was introduced to play tennis when she was nine. In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university. But two years later she returned. With the help / (Under the guidance ) of some famous coaches，including her husband /Following the in?structions of several famous coaches，she has been making greater and greater achievements/ pro?gress/ improvement( s) rapidly. As a result, she won the 2011 French Open singles title, becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles.

Many people regard Li Na as a person with strong determination/mind and think highly of her for keeping her word. In my opinion, what im?pressed me most was not only her excellent per?formance in competitions but also her courage of challenging greater goals. She is really an out?standing player.