Question

某期中學生報的“熱點話題”專欄討論的主題是“上大學是高中生的唯一選擇嗎？”你班同學就此話題進行了熱烈討論。請用英語給該專欄的編輯寫一封信，介紹討論結果，并發(fā)表你的個人意見。
要點：1． 結果：75%左右的學生認為應該上大學；15%左右的學生認為不必上大學；10%左右的學生認為無所謂。
2． 觀點：（1）上大學能夠增長知識、提高素養(yǎng)、利于擇業(yè)；（2）大學的學費昂貴，畢業(yè)后就業(yè)困難；（3）成功的路千萬條，不一定非要上大學。
【寫作要求】1. 必須用5個句子表達所有內(nèi)容；
2. 標題和開頭已給出，短文開頭不計入總句數(shù)。
3. 信的開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)；
【評分標準】句子結構準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結構連貫。

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear Editor,
The students in our class had a discussion about whether the only way for senior high students to succeed is to go to college.
75% of the students thought it necessary to go to college, for college education can increase their knowledge and improve their personal qualities as well. However, 15% of the students thought that it is no use going to college because it’s extremely difficult for college graduates to get satisfactory jobs. In addition, the tuition is too high for their families to pay for. The remaining 10% held the view that “All roads lead to Rome.” Therefore, they thought it doesn’t make any difference whether they go to college or not.
In my opinion, it’s a better choice to go to college because we can receive more education. But if we are unable to enter college, there are many other choices for us, and we can still contribute to society.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇以寫信形式的作文，注意信的格式，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達法。
點評：一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。