【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Hello, everyone. Welcome to our school. Now I’d like to introduce our school to you. Our school is located in the north part of the city. It’s famous as its beautiful scenery. There lie a lake in our school, that students can boat. Close to our school is a beautiful park with flower around. Every class is made up 50 lively students. They are warm, generous but ready to offer help. They feel honoured when ask for help. So they are very friendly and easy to get along with them. You will have the wonderful time and get used to the life soon.

【答案】1. north→northern

2. as→for

3. lie→lies

4. that→where

5. flower→flowers

6. up后加of

7. but→and

8. ask→asked

9. 去掉them

10. the→a

【解析】本文主要是介紹一所學校的情況。

1. 考查形容詞作定語。句意;我們學校位于城市的北部。修飾名詞part的應(yīng)是形容詞。故north 改為northern.

2. 考查固定搭配。句意:我們學校因其美麗的風景而出名。be famous for…因(某事)而出名;be famous as… 因(身份)……而出名故把as改成 for。

3. 考查主謂一致。句意:學校有一個湖。主語是a lake,謂語用單數(shù)。故lie改為lies。

4. 考查非限制性定語從句。句意:學校有個湖,學生們可以在這個湖里劃船。湖(a lake)是先行詞,在定語從句中作地點狀語,故只能用where引導,不能用that。

5. 考查名詞。公園里有許多花,“花”要用復數(shù)。

6. 考查固定搭配。be made up of………組成。

7. 考查連詞。句意:他們熱情大方,樂于助人。是并列關(guān)系(and)而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系(but),故but 改為and。

8. 考查非謂語作狀語。句意:當他們被求助時他們感到榮幸。與邏輯主語they是被動關(guān)系,應(yīng)用過去分詞作狀語。

9. 考查動詞不定式。句意:他們很友好而且很容易相處。them為多余,邏輯賓語為句子主語

10. 考查固定搭配。句意:你會度過一段美好的時光。have a wonderful time“過得愉快”。故把the改為a。

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