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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1）每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。
2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I enter the primary school. With modern life go rapidly nowadays, many people suffer from different kind of diseases, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in great need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people's lives. Although to be a good doctor is very difficult, but nowadays I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I'll pay more attention on studies. After all, only by working hardly can one succeed.

Answer 1

【答案】①have→has

②enter→entered

③go→going

④kind→kinds

⑤become后加a

⑥去掉but

⑦health→healthy

⑧me→myself

⑨on→to

⑩hardly→hard

【解析】該文講述作者的夢想是想成為一名醫(yī)生，并決定為之努力。

①have→has 考查主謂一致。主語為everyone，謂語動詞用單數(shù)。故將have改為has。

②enter→entered 考查謂語。since引導的從句用一般過去時態(tài)。故把enter改為entered。

③go→going 考查非謂語動詞。with+賓語+賓補，賓補動詞go與賓語life為主動意義關(guān)系，用doing形式作賓語補語。故將go改為going。

④kind→kinds 考查名詞。different kinds of各種不同的。故將kind改為kinds。

⑤become后加a 考查冠詞。docter是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，故在become后加a。

⑥去掉but Athough引導讓步狀語從句，but連接的句子是并列句，因此but和atthough不能一起用。故將athough去掉。

⑦health→healthy 考查形容詞。保持健康keep healthy。故將health改成healthy。

⑧me→myself 考查反身代詞。該處意為“告訴我自己”，代詞用myself。故將me改為myself。

⑨on→to 考查介詞。pay attention to注意……為固定搭配。故將on改為to。

⑩hardly→hard 考查副詞。work hard努力學習，hardly意為“幾乎不”。故將hardly改為hard。