Question

3．Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below．
請(qǐng)以下列詞語(yǔ)為關(guān)鍵詞寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．

match      winner    loser              result

內(nèi)容：（1）自己或他人的一次經(jīng)歷；
     （2）你的感受．
注意：（1）必須使用所給4個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞；
     （2）詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)；
     （3）不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．

Answer 1

分析 本文為開放式作文，根據(jù)所給關(guān)鍵詞和提示內(nèi)容，要求考生運(yùn)用生活中的事例來解釋說明，屬于提綱作文．在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)使用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：be lost in thought（陷入沉思），put all our efforts to do…..（努力去做），desired to do （渴望去做），belonged to （屬于），claim （聲稱，宣稱），focus on（集中在…..），sb be convinced that（與…..相處融洽）．

解答 In my life，there is an experience making me lost in thought．Last month，I，together with my teammates，had a basketball match against another basketball team，hoping to win the match and earning great honor for our team．【高分句型】Having put all our efforts to practice playing basketball whenever we had time，we were strongly desired to be the winner．【高分句型】However，not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser at all．【高分句型】All of us felt disappointed，believing that honor never belonged to us．It was our coach's words that educated us a lot．He claimed that instead of being focused on the result，we should focus more on the process and correct our mistakes，which would help improve us more in the future．（經(jīng)歷）
From this experience，I am convinced that a result is not everything．Only by focusing more on correcting our mistakes can we better ourselves in the future．（感受）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)和關(guān)鍵詞．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．