寫(xiě)作(共兩節(jié),滿分35分)

第一節(jié) 短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題1分,滿分10分)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(___),并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I’m an senior high school student. I’m upset these days because my parents. They pay too much attention on my study. I have to report my test results to them every time. If I get good grades, they will be happy and satisfied. But if not, they will be worrying about me, especially my mom. I never want to let them down, but she has made a plan for my future. I was very bored with it and don’t know how to do. I know they really love me. I also know knowledges is important for everybody. Therefore, I can’t stand they are always making me to study. I really expect they can understand me.

1.an→a

2.because后加 of

3.on--to

4.worrying—worried

5.them—her

6.was—am

7.how--what

8.knowledges—knowledge

9.Therefore –However

10.to study去掉 to

【解析】

1.an→a不定冠詞誤用。senior是以輔音開(kāi)頭的單詞,所以前面用a。

2.連詞誤用。because of后面加名詞;because后面要跟句子。

3.介詞誤用。pay attention to注意。

4.形容詞誤用。be worried about擔(dān)心。

5.代詞誤用。此處是指不能讓我的媽媽失望。所以應(yīng)用her代替。

6. 時(shí)態(tài)誤用。根據(jù)后半句的時(shí)態(tài),可知此處是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

7.特殊疑問(wèn)詞誤用。what做do 的賓語(yǔ)。

8.單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。knowledge是不可數(shù)名詞,不能變復(fù)數(shù)。

9.副詞誤用。根據(jù)句意可知此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折。however然而。

10.非謂語(yǔ)誤用。make sb do sth.,是固定短語(yǔ),中間不加介詞。

考點(diǎn):短文改錯(cuò)

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