【題目】假如你是李華,在一位名叫Tina的外國友人的博客上,你看到了如下內(nèi)容:

I am often told not to put off(推遲) till tomorrow what can be done today.

I’ve tried many times but I cannot make it. Can you give me some advice?

請你根據(jù)博客的內(nèi)容和寫作要點提示,給她回復。寫作要點:1. 表明自己的看法;2. 提出至少兩條建議。

注意: 1. 詞數(shù)120左右, 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,但不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 請保持卷面整潔,美觀!

Dear Tina,

I understand your situation. _________________________________________________________________________

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Hope my ideas will help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Tina,

I understand your situation. After all, no one wants to put off till

tomorrow what can be done today, for we have many new things to do the next day.The bad habit, once formed, is really difficult to get rid of. However, with a strong will and some necessary measures, you can finally make it. As a proverb(格言) says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”

You can make friends with those who don’t put off till tomorrow what can bedone today. If so, you will learn from them and care about how they view you. Besides, reward yourself with something you enjoyafter you finish a big task, which I believe will make you feel good.

Hope my ideas will help.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析這是一篇敘述性的提建議寫作。根據(jù)博客的內(nèi)容和寫作要點提示,清晰表達,并且要不失亮點,準確把握英文句子的書寫,避免出現(xiàn)漢語式英語的現(xiàn)象。要求:1. 表明自己的看法;2. 提出至少兩條建議。注意:1. 詞數(shù)120左右。 【亮點說明】范文首先闡述這位友人存在的習慣不好的,接著鼓勵他去改掉壞習慣,然后另起一段具體地提建議。雖結(jié)構(gòu)簡單,但是層次清晰,其中也用了一些高級的句型,使得文章水平在一個高的層面,如: you will learn from them and care about how they view you.賓語從句;You can make friends with those who don’t put off till tomorrow what can bedone today.;reward yourself with something you enjoyafter you finish a big task, which I believe will make you feel good.等定語從句;另外引用引言As a proverb(格言) says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”使得所提的建議更有說服力。還采用了一些比較好的短語,After all,畢竟;get rid of除去;另外;If so,如果這樣;有條有理,避免文章比較單一,簡單無味;同樣有一些好的銜接詞:However;Besides;如這些都給文章帶來了亮點。

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