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4．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．

My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day．She liked it at once．Then 
she bent down and picked^up to look at a price on it．As she did this，lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt!I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face!My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us．It was turned out to be her own cup，that she'd left on the shelf by mistake．The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister，for I just thought it was funny!

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分析 全文大意
幾天前，我和姐姐去購物．姐姐對(duì)一可愛的杯子，一見鐘情，于是她就拿起看看價(jià)錢．可是，一不小心，杯里的茶水灑了她一身．姐姐尷尬地想盡快離開，店員也很尷尬．因?yàn)楸豢粗械谋�子就是姐姐她自己的，被她誤放在貨架上了．我覺得這是件很搞笑的事．

解答 My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day．
1．a(chǎn)re 改為were．根據(jù)前面主句的謂語動(dòng)詞saw為一般過去式可知，when引導(dǎo)的從句中are應(yīng)改為were，主從句時(shí)態(tài)保持一致．

She liked it at once．Then she bent down and picked∧up          
2．it．短語pick up sth．拿起某物．此處指拿起杯子，it指代前面名詞cup．pick it up 符合結(jié)構(gòu)"動(dòng)詞+代詞+副詞"．

to look ata price on it．
3．a(chǎn) 改為 the．此處特指杯子上的價(jià)錢，所以用定冠詞the．

As she did this，lots of tea splashed（灑）onhis T-shirt!
4．his 改為 her．根據(jù)主語she可知，其形容詞性物主代詞應(yīng)為her．

I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face!
5．hardly 改為 hard．hardly not雙重否定表示肯定則句意為"努力笑話…"，此處應(yīng)為"我盡量不笑話我姐姐的窘境"． 
                                            
My sister wanted∧get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us．
6．to．固定短語want to do． 

It was-turned out to be her own cup，
7．去掉．習(xí)慣搭配"it turns out to be"表示"結(jié)果是，證明是"

that she had left on the shelf by mistake． 
8．that改為which．which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句．

The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister，
9．embarrassing改為embarrassed．"v+ed"形容詞修飾主語店員assistant，表示"使…感到…"．

for I just thought it was funny!
10．for改為but．此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，店員和我姐姐一樣感到尷尬而我感到好笑．

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