Question

假定你是李華，你的英國好友Mary考試失敗，對自己失去了信心，產(chǎn)生了厭學(xué)情緒。請你給他發(fā)一封郵件開導(dǎo)他，要點(diǎn)如下：

不要過于傷心

放松，減少焦慮心理

和老師交流有助于提高成績

探索（explore）適合自己的有效學(xué)習(xí)方法

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；

可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

Dear Mary,

I am sorry to hear that you failed the exams and have lost interest in schoolwork.

In my opinion, grades are not the only purpose of learning, so don’t feel too bad. At this moment, you should take it easy and find ways to reduce your anxiety. Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music? If you can talk to the teachers that you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that help you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.

Anyway, I hope you can rebuild your self-confidence soon!

Yours truly

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。假定你是李華，你的英國好友Mary考試失敗，對自己失去了信心，產(chǎn)生了厭學(xué)情緒。請你給他發(fā)一封郵件開導(dǎo)他，要點(diǎn)如下：不要過于傷心;放松，減少焦慮心理;和老師交流有助于提高成績;探索（explore）適合自己的有效學(xué)習(xí)方法。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】I am sorry to hear that you failed the exams and have lost interest in schoolwork.

這里含有一個(gè)賓語從句；If you can talk to the teachers that you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that help you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.這里含有一個(gè)定語從句。

考點(diǎn)：話題類書面表達(dá)