11.目前,不少人在寫作文或交流時喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡語言.就此現(xiàn)象,你班最近舉行了一場討論.請根據(jù)下表的提示,客觀地介紹討論的情況及你的觀點.
40%的同學認為60%的同學認為你的觀點
1.有點荒誕,有時讓人無法理解;
2.違背了漢語的語法規(guī)則,對學習毫無幫助.
1.幽默,使語言更生動;
2.有助于表達思想.
 1.…
 2.…
注意:
1.對所給提示,不要簡單翻譯,可適當增加細節(jié),使行文連貫.
2.詞數(shù)150左右.開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù).
3.參考詞匯:荒誕:ridiculous
Nowadays,with the development of the Internet,there came a kind of language called Web Language.

分析 這篇寫作題材是對使用網(wǎng)絡語言的兩種不同觀點.這種文章一般層次比較清晰,四段:第一段為總述;第二段反對的觀點及依據(jù);第三段贊同的觀點及依據(jù);第四段自己觀點.要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據(jù)時要盡量使語言多樣化;2.自我觀點表達時要有正確的判斷,要有辯證的思維.一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達作者的意思.考生應明白高考書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文.它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,運用所學英語知識準確地表達意思的能力為本題主要考查點.
【亮點說明】本文較好完成了題目規(guī)定的任務,要點齊全、層次清楚、行文連貫.用詞不落俗套.如用not in favor of而不是多數(shù)考生會用的against表示"反對",用fond of代替for.在表達自己觀點的時候更是直截了當,Worse still,更糟糕的是,起到連接的作用,I don't think it good to use Web Language.體現(xiàn)了表達的多樣性.but you may also make your idea confusing,leaving other people at a loss.這句話使用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語.

解答 With the development of the Internet,there has come a kind of language called Web Language.Recently,our class has held a discussion on whether it's good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication.(高分句型)40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language,thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life.(高分句型)Worse still,it's hard for them to make themselves understood.In their opinion,it is against Chinese grammar,and it's not beneficial to students'studies.However,the rest of the students are fond of it.They think what they say will sound humorous,which makes the language more lively.(高分句型)Moreover,it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.In my opinion,it is a phenomenon worth thinking about.I don't think it good to use Web Language.It may be fashionable as some think,but you may also make your idea confusing,leaving other people at a loss.(高分句型)

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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