Question

【題目】假如你是 Li Ming，是陽光中學(xué)高三的學(xué)生。你們學(xué)校這學(xué)期搬到了新校區(qū)，周圍有很多化工廠。每天都能聞到化工廠的刺鼻的味道。這給全校師生帶來很大的影響.請你給市長寫封信，反映學(xué)校周圍的空氣污染問題，并提出建議。

要求：

1. 詞數(shù)： 120 左右；

2. 內(nèi)容充實(shí)，語言連貫通順;

3. 開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Mr. Mayor，

I am a senior 3 student in Sunshine Middle School.

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We are looking forward to your answer.

Yours，

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Mr. Mayor，

I am a senior 3 student in Sunshine Middle School. This term our school moved to the new campus, around which are many chemical plants. The terrible smell from the factories can be smelled everywhere in our school, especially in the morning.

Our life has been badly affected. Our teachers all feel there is something wrong with their throats so that they can’t make themselves heard in class. Besides, most of the students feel so uncomfortable that they can’t concentrate on their studies. What matters most is that the poisonous smell will have a bad effect on our health in the long run.

Given the severe situation, we strongly request the government take immediate action to stop the air pollution. We suggest the factories near our school be closed down.

We are looking forward to your answer.

Yours，

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求就校園周圍空氣污染問題給市長寫信，反映情況，提出建議，第一段介紹情況，第二段闡明空氣污染給師生帶來的危害，第三段提出建議。注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z和句型，讓文章有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)】

本文較好完成了題目規(guī)定的任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)齊全、層次清楚、行文連貫。用詞不落俗套。如用Given the severe situation,鑒于這種嚴(yán)峻的形勢，close down關(guān)閉，句式體現(xiàn)多樣化：如定語從句This term our school moved to the new campus, around which are many chemical plants. so that句型：Our teachers all felt there is something wrong with their throats so that they can’t make themselves heard in class.名詞性從句：What matters most is that the poisonous smell will have a bad effect on our health in the long run.虛擬語氣：We suggest the factories near our school be closed down.體現(xiàn)了表達(dá)的多樣性。