Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）, 并在其下寫出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改: 在錯的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Music plays a important role in my life and listen to music is my favorite activity. Usually I preferred to express my feeling through music, and I like pop music best. I don’t like rock music because of I think it’s too noisily. When I am tired after studying or when I am nervous before exams, music helps me feel relaxing and fresh. I am not good at singing or I can play the piano and the violin. In addition, I am fond of listening to foreign song in order to learn more about the cultures of different countries as well learning about the world better. Music makes your life more colorful.

Answer 1

【答案】1.a 改為an,

2.listen 改為listening;

3.preferred 改為prefer;

4.去掉of,

5. noisily 改為noisy;

6.relaxing改為relaxed;

7.or 改為but;

8.song改為songs,

9.在well后面加as

10.your 改為my

【解析】本文是一篇記敘短文。講述了音樂對作者的重要性，并介紹了作者喜歡的歌曲類型。作者認為音樂豐富了他的生活。

1.“Music plays a important role in my life and listen to music is my favorite activity.” plays為動詞，role為名詞，前面有形容詞important修飾，因此應使用冠詞。而important的 第一個音節(jié)為元音，故將a改為an。

2.“and listen to music is my favorite activity.” 動名詞作主語，在動詞的基礎上加Ing,使該動詞或動詞短語，有名詞的各種特征，可作名詞靈活使用。故將listen改為listening。

3.“Usually I preferred to express my feeling through music” 瀏覽全文為一般現在時態(tài)，前后時態(tài)應保持一致。故將preferred改為prefer。

4.“I don’t like rock music because of I think it’s too noisily.” because是連詞,其后接原因狀語從句或回答以why開頭的問句； 而because of是復合介詞,其后接名詞、代詞或動名詞，或者what引導的名詞性從句�！�I think it’s too noisily.”是原因狀語從句，故將of刪掉。

5.“I don’t like rock music because of I think it’s too noisily.” too為副詞，應修飾動詞或形容詞。故將noisily改為noisy。

6.“music helps me feel relaxing and fresh.” relaxed表示人內心受到放松，relaxing表示事情本身令人fangsong。故將relaxing改為relaxed。

7.“I am not good at singing or I can play the piano and the violin.” 根據前文“I am not good at singing”我不是個好歌手，以及后文“I can play the piano and the violin”我會彈鋼琴和拉小提琴，兩句之間為轉折關系。故將or改為but。

8.“In addition, I am fond of listening to foreign song in order to learn more about the cultures of different countries as well learning about the world better.”由后文可知作者喜歡的是不同國家的歌曲，不只是一首，song為可數名詞，故將song改為songs。

9.“I am fond of listening to foreign song in order to learn more about the cultures of different countries as well learning about the world better.” “l(fā)earn more about the cultures of different countries”與“learning about the world better”兩者之間表示一種并列關系，都在講述聽外國歌曲的好處，應該用并列形式。故在well后面加as。

10.“Music makes your life more colorful.”瀏覽全文可知本文說的是音樂對作者的重要性，因此是使作者的生活更加豐富多彩，故將your改為my。